突破专四写作
一． 作文大纲要求及评分事项
二． 历年真题解析分类（附模板）
三． 经典范文分析
四． 专四写作步骤
五． 常见英语作文弊病与对策
六． 作文高分策略
七． 专四作文句型活用
八． 英文写作宗旨
一．专四大纲要求
㈠ 写作部分大纲要求
1. 考查要求
作文：能根据所给文章题目、提纲或图表、数据等，写一篇200单词左右的作文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺，表达得体。考试时间35分钟。
便条：能根据所给提示写50到60单词的便条通知请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。
2. 考查形式
本部分为主观试题，分两节：Section A and Section B.
Section A: composition
本节命题作文，文章体裁主要属于说明文、议论文或记叙文的范围。
Section B: note-writing
本节是写便条。
3. 考查目的
按照大纲要求测试学生书面表达能力。
㈡评分标准
1. 作文评分标准：
二．历年真题解析分类
一般考试中涉及的作文类型有提纲类作文，图表类作文和情景类作文，而专四考试中基本以提纲类作文为主。题材主要有文化教育、经济发展、环境保护、生活就业和社会热点。
时间 题目 类别
2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment 立场类 2008 The Benefits of Volunteering 给定观点类 2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online 立场类 2006 Using Tomorrow’s Money or Saving It 立场类 2005 My Idea of a University Art Festival 问题解决类 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing 立场类 2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 给定观点类 2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy 问题解决类 2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 给定观点类 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities 给定观点类 1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 对比类
☆ 模板大全（三段式）
模板一
① Now there is a growing concern∕awareness about话题, different people have/hold different views/attitudes. Some claim/take it for granted/believe that 观点
一. However, others argue that 观点二. From my point of view, /as for myself/for my part,/as far as I am concerned, 自己的论点.
② First and foremost/first of all/to begin with/ on the one hand, 理由一，展开/例子. In addition/besides/on the other hand, 理由二，展开/例子. Last but not least/finally/at last, 理由三，展开/例子.
③ From the foregoing/on account of this/ a natural conclusion can be drawn/we can safely draw a conclusion that/ on the whole/to sum up/in brief/in a word/in conclusion, 重申观点.
模板二
① When it comes to∕when asked about 话题, some people believe /argue/recognize/ think that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to/see eye to eye on the former/latter idea.
② There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2.
③ In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.
模板三
① People hold different views about 话题. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight
② For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3.
③ To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.
模板四
① The past few years have witnessed a phenomenon that 现象背景。Some people hold that 观点。However, I believe that 展开题目
② The benefits/significance/importance of 关键点lies in the following aspects. Firstly, 理由一，例子一。Secondly, 理由二，例子二。Finally, 理由三，例子三。 ③ To sum up/in brief/in conclusion, 重申观点 only 措施 can 结论。
模板五
① There is no doubt/it is true that 现象。However, as to the ways to 问题提出，different people hold different views. Some suggest that 建议一。Others argue that建议二。As far as I am concerned/in my opinion, I agree with the former/latter, the best way to solve the problem is 个人建议。
② The reasons can be listed below/as follows. First of all/on the one hand, 理由一，证明一。What’s more/on the other hand, 理由二，证明二。Thirdly’besides, 理由三，证明三。
③ In a word/all in all/in a summary, 重申观点。Therefore, I suggest措施。 模板六
① 复述题目，陈述现象。Some people are in favor of 现象while others take an opposite side. As far as I am concerned, 个人观点。
② On the one hand, 阐释优点。Firstly, 原因一。Secondly, 原因二。
③ On the other hand, 阐释缺点。例子。
④ Therefore, 结论。 However, we should be clear that 利大于弊/弊大于利，so I suggest that个人建议。
※小贴士：专四大作文最关键之处在于两点：一是文章结构紧密，条理清晰，尤其是开头，中间段落过渡以及结尾要能抓住判卷老师的眼球，这就需要考生熟悉常用开头，过渡与结尾的经典句型和模式；其次是理由或原因的合理罗列，这需要考生掌握一些真题背后的公共原因或理由，真正考试时就可以信手拈来，而不至于紧张过度没了思路。
理由或原因需要二点的话，就常用on the one hand, on the other hand从个人，社会角度展开论证；而三点的话，一般用first of all, in addition, finally∕last but not least从个人，社会和家庭朋友三角度分析原因。由于专四考试的特殊性，命题者一般会从社会进步，经济发展，环境保护，人与自然，人际交往和日常生活热点焦点事件等方向出题考察学生的英语思维与表达。基于这点，掌握一点量的所谓“公共原因和理由”就显得十分必要，比如有利于开阔眼界，增进友谊，家庭和睦，社会和谐，对经济的促进作用。
三．经典范文分析
1. Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so. What is your opinion?
Write on answer sheet three a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? 2009 →tourism has become a very big business and even the major source to promote tourism. ﹋They believe that tourism contributes greatly to the economic growth.◎ But I don’prospering the economy. exploring the tourism resources, tourism transportation, if planned poorly, can spoil scenery. nearly all the trails in Mountain Hua, the to pass through, causing damages to the integrity of the tourism attraction. we can never notice that scenic spots frequented by travelers are heavily polluted. Not all the tourists are aware of environmental Therefore, we can not afford to ignore the negative effects tourism brings to the 行文思路上，组织结构上，语言表达上。
2. Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. What kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
On Choosing Friends
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
In the second part, provide one, two or more reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
思路1：选择与自己不同的人为友。思路2：选择与自己相似的人为友。思路3：两种朋友都要交。
提纲
这里提纲使用思路3，认为两种朋友都有好处，都可以结交。
第一部分，引出主题，明确提出两种交朋友的方式都可以。
第二部分，分别论证与己不同，与己相似交朋友及其益处。
第三部分，归纳总结，两种朋友都可以交。
On Choosing Friends
Some people like to choose those who are different from themselves while others do things together naturally and harmoniously. Therefore, they similar friends for help the way they deal with difficulties may be more appropriate and comfortable to us.
On the other hand, if a person makes friends different from him, he gets chances may be different from him in character, occupation, social status, or political and religious beliefs. To make friends with them, he has to chat, play, or do together with them. In the process of doing these, he can learn a lot of things that he has never experienced by himself and he can also enjoy being with them if he knows them well. I think that it is a good idea for me to have both types of friends---some who are similar to me and some who are different from me. In this way, 3. Write on answer sheet three a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Should Class Attendance Be Required?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Should Class Attendance Be Required?
In fact, required simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for poor attendance in his A student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile when his teacher merely repeats materials from the textbook or wastes class time by telling irrelevant stories. attendance and performance in a course. A student may never miss a single attendance in a course, but who knows whether or not he or she is just sitting there daydreaming all the time?
四．专四写作五步骤
审题 构思 提纲 写作 检查
专四考试考生担心时间不够，经常出现作文跑题，写不完的现象。鉴于专四考试的特殊性，建议考生可以按以下步骤组织写作：
审题：拿到题目后，静下心理，仔细审题，多看几遍题目，清楚题目要求。把文章核心词和短语用下划线划出来，如果题目有生词的话，尽可能通过上下文推断意思。
构思：思考题目考的是什么方面的话题，应该从哪些方面展开。放开思路，在脑海里搜寻与题目相关的信息，例如一些相关的报道、故事和学过的课本材料，相关的词语和句型表达。
提纲：构思完成后，写一个中文或英文的简单清晰的框架结构，不需要完整句子，只需列出要到，清楚结构即可。
写作：在内容已经基本确定的情况下，把各个要点分段，需要的话可以有例子论证说明。然后用合适流畅的词语句子表达。此阶段注意：首句要经典，段落层次感明显，结尾简单明了及书写工整。
检查：检查文章中的语法、词汇、拼写和标点等是否正确；保持卷面整洁。
五．常见作文弊病及对策
1.无话可说难下笔
主要是由于考生平时很少看文章、缺乏阅读、很少构思造成的。其实纵观历年考题，基本考查的都是人们普遍关注的社会话题和热门话题。对于考生来说，平时要注意多阅读中英文报刊杂志，扩大知识面，多关注思考社会热点话题。中文的从内容上把握，学习行文思路；英文的从语言上学习，多积累地道的表达，尤其是一些常用短语的使用，而非单词。
2.有话可说不对题
有的考生文章字数挺多，但没有写到点子上，严重跑题。专四一般为提纲性
写作，要严格按照题目要求进行。平时练习时，要多拿历年真题练兵，熟悉要求、写作步骤，仔细分析范文，模仿练习。
2. 文章结构混乱，缺少关联
这主要是由于没有紧扣题目要求导致。专四作文一般三段式写作，所以考生不应分段太少或太多，以免结构混乱。在论证论点时，要合理运用衔接手段，比如词汇的重复、同义反义、上下义、语义场和语法上的照应、省略、替代等。
3. 语言表达错误多
高分和低分的区别不在于内容和结构，其实在于语言上。低分作文会用词不当语法错误连篇累牍。考生应做到在灵活运用基本语法的基础上，多读，多写，多改。
4. 词汇句式单一
用词贫乏，句式单一是英语学习者的通病。句式过于单一简单很难得高分。所以平时应多阅读文章、积累好句式表达，从阅读中提高写作。
5. 时间把握不好
在保证质量的基础上，要能在规定时间内写完。一句话，卡时间多写多练。
六．作文高分策略
无论是英语专业学生还是非英语专业学生，作文往往是考试中的拦路虎，难以获得高分。模板也背了，基本语法也掌握了，句型也会使用了，可就是得不了高分数。
高分作文策略
长短句交叉
会使用插入语
用词多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词 关键词换用，切勿老用重复词
句型使用准确、地道
1.适当用不同句型结构表达语意，比如主动变被动，利于表现事实的真实客观。结尾时的we should pay great attention to可以换为great attention should be paid to. E.g. Great attention should be paid to the all-round development of each individual student.我们应该更好地关注每个学生的全面发展。
2.善用插入语，无论是口语还是笔试作文，灵活使用插入语会文章更紧凑，起到某种修辞作用，如强调、过渡等。一般是把副词或连词等放在主语、动词或助动词后，两边加逗号隔开。如however, what’s more, actually, for example, I think, etc. E.g. Other people, however, take it for granted that
3.勤换词、换表达 文章用词不能单调，重复，比如good, bad, thing, we, can, many, it is等
E.g. I haven’t forgotten the very exciting day when mom bought me a computer as birthday gift, which I am interested in so that I indulged myself in searching a lot of information I want, and enjoy a lot of beautiful music. That night I couldn’t sleep, because I can feel the whole world.
I never fail to remember the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on
me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
※小贴士：经典30词替换 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of)替换many. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6: take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think
7.affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. E.g. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything或little or nothing替换hardly
13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. Be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
七．专四作文句型活用
1.引话题
When it comes to 话题, some people think/hold/believe...
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 话题.
Recently, 话题 has been brought into focus.
Presently, there is a heated discussion about 话题 both on and off campus. It has been a contentious/controversial issue as to 话题.
话题 has aroused great public concern in China.
There is no denying the fact that 话题.
It is a common scene around us that 话题.
2.提论点
In my view/opinion, personally, 论点.
My view is that 论点.
From my point of view, I hold/think 论点.
As for myself/for my part, I would like to 论点.
As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to 论点.
3.举例子
For example/instance …
A good case in point is…
A particular example for this is…
Consider the case of…
Let take…as an example…
Let me make an analogy for you.
4.找原因
There are many reasons for…
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
The first reason can be obviously seen.
Most people would agree that…
Part of the explanation is…
5.结尾
In summary, in short, in brief, to sum up, from the foregoing, in conclusion, all in all, on the whole, in a word, on account of this, it can be concluded that,
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that… Take into account of all these factors; we may reach the conclusion that…
八．英文写作宗旨
1. 基本语法正确
Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
Pollution is the biggest problem of cities.
Bicycle is the common means of transport in developing country.
The bicycle is the common means of transport in developing country.
Wages have been on the rise in the past couple of years.
Wages have been on a rise in the past couple of years.
What is in fashion these days?
What is on fashion these days?
The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract more people to come here. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract more people to come here.
2. 用词得当
At the same time, the grain requirement in people’s diet consequently kept dropping. At the same time, the grain consumption in people’s diet consequently kept dropping. Learning English is not an easy thing.
Learning English is not an easy task.
Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews. In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.
In fact, fresh water is far from adequate.
The population of China will amount to 2 billion in 2020 if not controlled. The population of China will reach 2 billion in 2020 if not controlled.
3. 表达简练
As far as I am concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future. As far as I am concerned, I want to be an interpreter.
There is no consensus of opinion among people as to the views on ageism. There is no consensus among people as to the views on ageism.
The explosion was audible to the ear.
The explosion was audible.
4. 连贯
He was knocked down by a bus, but it was not serious.
He was knocked down by a bus, but was not seriously hurt.
To succeed in this battle, persistence is needed.
To succeed in this battle, one needs to be persistent.
5. 避免中式英语
We learn some knowledge about animals, even some plants.
We learn a lot about animals, even some plants.
These problems are really serious.
This is a serious problem.
I think there is no relation between numbers and luck.
I don’t think there is any relation between numbers and luck.
We can get to know the society through taking part in serving for the society.
W can learn about society through volunteer work.
突破专四写作
一． 作文大纲要求及评分事项
二． 历年真题解析分类（附模板）
三． 经典范文分析
四． 专四写作步骤
五． 常见英语作文弊病与对策
六． 作文高分策略
七． 专四作文句型活用
八． 英文写作宗旨
一．专四大纲要求
㈠ 写作部分大纲要求
1. 考查要求
作文：能根据所给文章题目、提纲或图表、数据等，写一篇200单词左右的作文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺，表达得体。考试时间35分钟。
便条：能根据所给提示写50到60单词的便条通知请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。
2. 考查形式
本部分为主观试题，分两节：Section A and Section B.
Section A: composition
本节命题作文，文章体裁主要属于说明文、议论文或记叙文的范围。
Section B: note-writing
本节是写便条。
3. 考查目的
按照大纲要求测试学生书面表达能力。
㈡评分标准
1. 作文评分标准：
二．历年真题解析分类
一般考试中涉及的作文类型有提纲类作文，图表类作文和情景类作文，而专四考试中基本以提纲类作文为主。题材主要有文化教育、经济发展、环境保护、生活就业和社会热点。
时间 题目 类别
2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment 立场类 2008 The Benefits of Volunteering 给定观点类 2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online 立场类 2006 Using Tomorrow’s Money or Saving It 立场类 2005 My Idea of a University Art Festival 问题解决类 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing 立场类 2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 给定观点类 2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy 问题解决类 2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 给定观点类 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities 给定观点类 1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 对比类
☆ 模板大全（三段式）
模板一
① Now there is a growing concern∕awareness about话题, different people have/hold different views/attitudes. Some claim/take it for granted/believe that 观点
一. However, others argue that 观点二. From my point of view, /as for myself/for my part,/as far as I am concerned, 自己的论点.
② First and foremost/first of all/to begin with/ on the one hand, 理由一，展开/例子. In addition/besides/on the other hand, 理由二，展开/例子. Last but not least/finally/at last, 理由三，展开/例子.
③ From the foregoing/on account of this/ a natural conclusion can be drawn/we can safely draw a conclusion that/ on the whole/to sum up/in brief/in a word/in conclusion, 重申观点.
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① When it comes to∕when asked about 话题, some people believe /argue/recognize/ think that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to/see eye to eye on the former/latter idea.
② There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2.
③ In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.
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① People hold different views about 话题. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight
② For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3.
③ To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申观点或表决心.
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① The past few years have witnessed a phenomenon that 现象背景。Some people hold that 观点。However, I believe that 展开题目
② The benefits/significance/importance of 关键点lies in the following aspects. Firstly, 理由一，例子一。Secondly, 理由二，例子二。Finally, 理由三，例子三。 ③ To sum up/in brief/in conclusion, 重申观点 only 措施 can 结论。
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① There is no doubt/it is true that 现象。However, as to the ways to 问题提出，different people hold different views. Some suggest that 建议一。Others argue that建议二。As far as I am concerned/in my opinion, I agree with the former/latter, the best way to solve the problem is 个人建议。
② The reasons can be listed below/as follows. First of all/on the one hand, 理由一，证明一。What’s more/on the other hand, 理由二，证明二。Thirdly’besides, 理由三，证明三。
③ In a word/all in all/in a summary, 重申观点。Therefore, I suggest措施。 模板六
① 复述题目，陈述现象。Some people are in favor of 现象while others take an opposite side. As far as I am concerned, 个人观点。
② On the one hand, 阐释优点。Firstly, 原因一。Secondly, 原因二。
③ On the other hand, 阐释缺点。例子。
④ Therefore, 结论。 However, we should be clear that 利大于弊/弊大于利，so I suggest that个人建议。
※小贴士：专四大作文最关键之处在于两点：一是文章结构紧密，条理清晰，尤其是开头，中间段落过渡以及结尾要能抓住判卷老师的眼球，这就需要考生熟悉常用开头，过渡与结尾的经典句型和模式；其次是理由或原因的合理罗列，这需要考生掌握一些真题背后的公共原因或理由，真正考试时就可以信手拈来，而不至于紧张过度没了思路。
理由或原因需要二点的话，就常用on the one hand, on the other hand从个人，社会角度展开论证；而三点的话，一般用first of all, in addition, finally∕last but not least从个人，社会和家庭朋友三角度分析原因。由于专四考试的特殊性，命题者一般会从社会进步，经济发展，环境保护，人与自然，人际交往和日常生活热点焦点事件等方向出题考察学生的英语思维与表达。基于这点，掌握一点量的所谓“公共原因和理由”就显得十分必要，比如有利于开阔眼界，增进友谊，家庭和睦，社会和谐，对经济的促进作用。
三．经典范文分析
1. Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so. What is your opinion?
Write on answer sheet three a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? 2009 →tourism has become a very big business and even the major source to promote tourism. ﹋They believe that tourism contributes greatly to the economic growth.◎ But I don’prospering the economy. exploring the tourism resources, tourism transportation, if planned poorly, can spoil scenery. nearly all the trails in Mountain Hua, the to pass through, causing damages to the integrity of the tourism attraction. we can never notice that scenic spots frequented by travelers are heavily polluted. Not all the tourists are aware of environmental Therefore, we can not afford to ignore the negative effects tourism brings to the 行文思路上，组织结构上，语言表达上。
2. Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. What kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
On Choosing Friends
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
In the second part, provide one, two or more reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
思路1：选择与自己不同的人为友。思路2：选择与自己相似的人为友。思路3：两种朋友都要交。
提纲
这里提纲使用思路3，认为两种朋友都有好处，都可以结交。
第一部分，引出主题，明确提出两种交朋友的方式都可以。
第二部分，分别论证与己不同，与己相似交朋友及其益处。
第三部分，归纳总结，两种朋友都可以交。
On Choosing Friends
Some people like to choose those who are different from themselves while others do things together naturally and harmoniously. Therefore, they similar friends for help the way they deal with difficulties may be more appropriate and comfortable to us.
On the other hand, if a person makes friends different from him, he gets chances may be different from him in character, occupation, social status, or political and religious beliefs. To make friends with them, he has to chat, play, or do together with them. In the process of doing these, he can learn a lot of things that he has never experienced by himself and he can also enjoy being with them if he knows them well. I think that it is a good idea for me to have both types of friends---some who are similar to me and some who are different from me. In this way, 3. Write on answer sheet three a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Should Class Attendance Be Required?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Should Class Attendance Be Required?
In fact, required simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for poor attendance in his A student should be allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class experience is worthwhile when his teacher merely repeats materials from the textbook or wastes class time by telling irrelevant stories. attendance and performance in a course. A student may never miss a single attendance in a course, but who knows whether or not he or she is just sitting there daydreaming all the time?
四．专四写作五步骤
审题 构思 提纲 写作 检查
专四考试考生担心时间不够，经常出现作文跑题，写不完的现象。鉴于专四考试的特殊性，建议考生可以按以下步骤组织写作：
审题：拿到题目后，静下心理，仔细审题，多看几遍题目，清楚题目要求。把文章核心词和短语用下划线划出来，如果题目有生词的话，尽可能通过上下文推断意思。
构思：思考题目考的是什么方面的话题，应该从哪些方面展开。放开思路，在脑海里搜寻与题目相关的信息，例如一些相关的报道、故事和学过的课本材料，相关的词语和句型表达。
提纲：构思完成后，写一个中文或英文的简单清晰的框架结构，不需要完整句子，只需列出要到，清楚结构即可。
写作：在内容已经基本确定的情况下，把各个要点分段，需要的话可以有例子论证说明。然后用合适流畅的词语句子表达。此阶段注意：首句要经典，段落层次感明显，结尾简单明了及书写工整。
检查：检查文章中的语法、词汇、拼写和标点等是否正确；保持卷面整洁。
五．常见作文弊病及对策
1.无话可说难下笔
主要是由于考生平时很少看文章、缺乏阅读、很少构思造成的。其实纵观历年考题，基本考查的都是人们普遍关注的社会话题和热门话题。对于考生来说，平时要注意多阅读中英文报刊杂志，扩大知识面，多关注思考社会热点话题。中文的从内容上把握，学习行文思路；英文的从语言上学习，多积累地道的表达，尤其是一些常用短语的使用，而非单词。
2.有话可说不对题
有的考生文章字数挺多，但没有写到点子上，严重跑题。专四一般为提纲性
写作，要严格按照题目要求进行。平时练习时，要多拿历年真题练兵，熟悉要求、写作步骤，仔细分析范文，模仿练习。
2. 文章结构混乱，缺少关联
这主要是由于没有紧扣题目要求导致。专四作文一般三段式写作，所以考生不应分段太少或太多，以免结构混乱。在论证论点时，要合理运用衔接手段，比如词汇的重复、同义反义、上下义、语义场和语法上的照应、省略、替代等。
3. 语言表达错误多
高分和低分的区别不在于内容和结构，其实在于语言上。低分作文会用词不当语法错误连篇累牍。考生应做到在灵活运用基本语法的基础上，多读，多写，多改。
4. 词汇句式单一
用词贫乏，句式单一是英语学习者的通病。句式过于单一简单很难得高分。所以平时应多阅读文章、积累好句式表达，从阅读中提高写作。
5. 时间把握不好
在保证质量的基础上，要能在规定时间内写完。一句话，卡时间多写多练。
六．作文高分策略
无论是英语专业学生还是非英语专业学生，作文往往是考试中的拦路虎，难以获得高分。模板也背了，基本语法也掌握了，句型也会使用了，可就是得不了高分数。
高分作文策略
长短句交叉
会使用插入语
用词多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词 关键词换用，切勿老用重复词
句型使用准确、地道
1.适当用不同句型结构表达语意，比如主动变被动，利于表现事实的真实客观。结尾时的we should pay great attention to可以换为great attention should be paid to. E.g. Great attention should be paid to the all-round development of each individual student.我们应该更好地关注每个学生的全面发展。
2.善用插入语，无论是口语还是笔试作文，灵活使用插入语会文章更紧凑，起到某种修辞作用，如强调、过渡等。一般是把副词或连词等放在主语、动词或助动词后，两边加逗号隔开。如however, what’s more, actually, for example, I think, etc. E.g. Other people, however, take it for granted that
3.勤换词、换表达 文章用词不能单调，重复，比如good, bad, thing, we, can, many, it is等
E.g. I haven’t forgotten the very exciting day when mom bought me a computer as birthday gift, which I am interested in so that I indulged myself in searching a lot of information I want, and enjoy a lot of beautiful music. That night I couldn’t sleep, because I can feel the whole world.
I never fail to remember the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on
me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
※小贴士：经典30词替换 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of)替换many. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6: take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think
7.affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. E.g. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything或little or nothing替换hardly
13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. Be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
七．专四作文句型活用
1.引话题
When it comes to 话题, some people think/hold/believe...
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 话题.
Recently, 话题 has been brought into focus.
Presently, there is a heated discussion about 话题 both on and off campus. It has been a contentious/controversial issue as to 话题.
话题 has aroused great public concern in China.
There is no denying the fact that 话题.
It is a common scene around us that 话题.
2.提论点
In my view/opinion, personally, 论点.
My view is that 论点.
From my point of view, I hold/think 论点.
As for myself/for my part, I would like to 论点.
As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to 论点.
3.举例子
For example/instance …
A good case in point is…
A particular example for this is…
Consider the case of…
Let take…as an example…
Let me make an analogy for you.
4.找原因
There are many reasons for…
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
The first reason can be obviously seen.
Most people would agree that…
Part of the explanation is…
5.结尾
In summary, in short, in brief, to sum up, from the foregoing, in conclusion, all in all, on the whole, in a word, on account of this, it can be concluded that,
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that… Take into account of all these factors; we may reach the conclusion that…
八．英文写作宗旨
1. 基本语法正确
Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities.
Pollution is the biggest problem of cities.
Bicycle is the common means of transport in developing country.
The bicycle is the common means of transport in developing country.
Wages have been on the rise in the past couple of years.
Wages have been on a rise in the past couple of years.
What is in fashion these days?
What is on fashion these days?
The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract more people to come here. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract more people to come here.
2. 用词得当
At the same time, the grain requirement in people’s diet consequently kept dropping. At the same time, the grain consumption in people’s diet consequently kept dropping. Learning English is not an easy thing.
Learning English is not an easy task.
Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews. In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.
In fact, fresh water is far from adequate.
The population of China will amount to 2 billion in 2020 if not controlled. The population of China will reach 2 billion in 2020 if not controlled.
3. 表达简练
As far as I am concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future. As far as I am concerned, I want to be an interpreter.
There is no consensus of opinion among people as to the views on ageism. There is no consensus among people as to the views on ageism.
The explosion was audible to the ear.
The explosion was audible.
4. 连贯
He was knocked down by a bus, but it was not serious.
He was knocked down by a bus, but was not seriously hurt.
To succeed in this battle, persistence is needed.
To succeed in this battle, one needs to be persistent.
5. 避免中式英语
We learn some knowledge about animals, even some plants.
We learn a lot about animals, even some plants.
These problems are really serious.
This is a serious problem.
I think there is no relation between numbers and luck.
I don’t think there is any relation between numbers and luck.
We can get to know the society through taking part in serving for the society.
W can learn about society through volunteer work.