细节描写片段练习
一、进球
他抢过球，转身一抛，把球抛进了篮筐里。
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二、吃辣椒
他拿起一根辣椒咬下去，辣得他晕头转向，他急忙找水喝。
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三、试卷发下来之后 老师把批好的试卷发了下来。在拿到试卷之前，我紧张得要命，就怕自己考砸了。试卷拿到手以后，我一看不及格，很是伤心。
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四、做错了题目
老师批评学生做错了题目，老师说：“你又做错了！”我无地自容。
要求：请同学们把老师批评学生做错了题目这个典型细节写得生动起来，要精心锤炼词语，巧妙运用修辞，善于想像联想，写一段片段作文。
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细节描写片段练习
一、进球
他抢过球，转身一抛，把球抛进了篮筐里。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、吃辣椒
他拿起一根辣椒咬下去，辣得他晕头转向，他急忙找水喝。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、试卷发下来之后 老师把批好的试卷发了下来。在拿到试卷之前，我紧张得要命，就怕自己考砸了。试卷拿到手以后，我一看不及格，很是伤心。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、做错了题目
老师批评学生做错了题目，老师说：“你又做错了！”我无地自容。
要求：请同学们把老师批评学生做错了题目这个典型细节写得生动起来，要精心锤炼词语，巧妙运用修辞，善于想像联想，写一段片段作文。
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