成功英语演讲的秘诀:开场白.结束语

成功英语演讲的秘诀:开场白、结束语

应对问题

-I will be pleased to answer any questions you may have at the end of the presentation. -Please can you save your questions till the end.

-If you have any questions, I will be pleased to answer them at the end of the presentation. -there will be time at the end of the presentation to answer your questions-so please feel free to ask me anything then.

-Don't hesitate to interrupt if you have a question.

-Please feel free to interrupt me at any time.

-Please stop me if you have any questions.

-If you need clarification on any point, you're welcome to ask questions at any time. -Can I come back to that point later?

-I will be coming to that point in a minute.

-That's a tricky question.

-We will go into details later. But just to give you an idea of...

-I am afraid there's no easy answer to that one...

-Yes, that's a very good point.

-Perhaps we could leave that point until the questions at the end of the presentation -I think I said that I would answer questions at the end of the presentation---perhaps you wouldn't mind waiting until then.

-I think we have time for just one more question

欢迎听众(正式)

- Welcome to our company

- I am pleased to be able to welcome you to our company...

- I'd like to thank you for coming.

- May I take this opportunity of thanking you for coming

欢迎听众(非正式 )

- I'm glad you could all get here...

- I'm glad to see so many people here.

- It's GREat to be back here.

- Hello again everybody. Thank you for being on time/making the effort to come today. - Welcome to X Part II.

受邀请在会议上致词

- I am delighted/pleased/glad to have the opportunity to present/of making this presentation...

- I am grateful for the opportunity to present...

- I'd like to thank you for inviting/asking me/giving me the chance to...

- Good morning/afternoon/evening ladies and gentleman

- It's my pleasant duty today to...

- I've been asked to...

告知演讲的话题

- the subject of my presentation is...

- I shall be speaking today about...

- My presentation concerns...

- Today's topic is...

- Today we are here to give a presentation on...

- Today we are here to talk about...Before we start, I'd like you meet my team members... - A brief look at today's agenda...(告诉听众所讲内容的先后顺序)

- Before we start our presentation, let's take a brief look at the agenda...

- I shall be offering a brief analysis of...

- the main area that I intend to cover in this presentation is...

- Take a moment and think of...

- Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about...

告诉听众发言的长度

- During the next ten minutes, I shall...

- I shall be speaking for about ten minutes...

- My presentation will last for about ten minutes...

- I won't take up more than ten minutes of your time...

- I don't intend to speak for longer than ten minutes...

- I know that time is short, so I intend to keep this brief

- I have a lot to cram in to the next ten minutes, so I'd better make a start...

引起听众的兴趣

- I'm going to be speaking about something that is vitally important to all of us. - My presentation will help solve a problem that has puzzled people for years...

- At the end of this presentation you will understand why this company has been so successful for so long...

- I am going to be talking about a product that could double your profit margins... - the next ten minutes will change your attitude to sales and marketing...

- Over the next ten minutes you are going to hear about something that will change the way your companies operate...

- By the end of this presentation you will know all there is to know about...

告诉听众内容要点

- there are five main aspects to this topic (...the first, ... the second, ...a third, ...another, ... the final)

- I am going to examine these topics in the following order (...first, ...next, ...after that, ...finally)

- I've divided my talk into five parts...

- I will deal with these topics in chronological order...

- I'm going to start with a general overview and then focus on this particular problem (...in general, ...more particularly).

- I want to start with this particular topic, and then draw some more general conclusions from it (...specifically, ... in a wider context).

- there are (a number of) factors that may affect...

- We have to take into account in any discussion of this subject, the following

considerations.

- We all ought to be aware of the following points.

结束语

-In conclusion, I'd like to...

-I'd like to finish by...

-Finally...

-By way of conclusion...

-I hope I have made myself understood

-I hope you have found this useful

-I hope this has given you some idea/clear idea/an outline of...

-Let me end by saying...

-That, then was all I had to say on...

-That concludes our presentation...

-I hope I've managed to give you a clearer picture of...

-If there are any questions, I'd be delighted to...

-Thank you for your attention...

-Let's break for a coffee at this point

-I am afraid that the clock is against us, so we had better stop here

-You have been a very attentive audience---thank you

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转帖二

做presentation ,我们要注意对话题的准备以及态度和身体语言等等,除此之外,我们还应该掌握一些常用句型。

1. Right, let's get started.

2. Let me introduce myself.

3. I've divided my presentation into three main parts.

4. Just to give you a brief overview.

5. I'll be saying more about this in a minute.

6. I'm sure the implications of this are clear to all of us.

7. There's an important point to be made here.

8. OK, let's move on. (go on to make your next point)

9. As you can see, the figures speak for themselves.

10. To go back to what I was saying earlier.

11. Are there any questions you'd like to ask at this point?

12. I'd like to look at this in more detail.

13. Let's put this into perspective. (to explain it this way)

14. Perhaps I should expand on that a little.

15. To digress for a moment? (to depart from your plan)

16. So, to sum up?

17. That brings me to the end of my talk.

18. Thank you. I'm sure you all have lots of questions.

转帖三 1. Greeting, name, position

Ladies and gentlemen. It’s an honor to have the opportunity to address such a distinguished audience.

Good morning. Let me start by saying just a few words about my own background. I started out in….

Good afternoon and thank you for making the effort to be here with us today.

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. It’s a pleasure to be with you today.

2. Ttile/Subject

I’d like to talk(to you) about….

I’m going to present the recent…

explain our position on…

brief you on….

inform you about…

describe…

The subject/focus/topic of my presentation….

We are here today to decide…

agree…

learn about….

The purpose of this talk is to update you on

put you in the picture about…

give you the background to…

3. Length

I shall only take …minutes of your time.

I plan to be brief.

This should only last …minutes.

4. Outline/Main parts

I’ve divided my presentation into four parts/sections. They are….

The subject can be looked at under the following headings:….

We can break this area down into the following fields:

First/First of all…

Secondly/then/next…

Thirdly/and then we come to…

Finally/lastly/last of all….

5. Questions

I’d be glad to answer any questions at the end of the my talk.

If you have any questions, please feel free to interrupt.

Please interrupt me if there’s something which needs clarifying. Otherwise, there’ll be time for discussion at the end

转帖四

I. Opening Remarks开场: Sample Opening Remarks

1) Thank you very much, Prof. Fawcett, for your very kind introduction. Mr.

Chairman, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning! I consider it a great honor to be asked to speak about …on this session of our symposium.

2) Ladies and gentleman. It’s an honor to have the opportunity to address such a distinguished audience.

3) Good morning. Let me start by saying just a few words about my own background.

4) Mr. Chairman, thank you very much for your kind introduction. President,

Distinguished colleagues, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning! Is my voice loud enough?

5) Good morning, everyone. I appreciate the opportunity to be with you today. I am here to talk to you about…

6) Good morning, everyone. I am very happy to have this chance to give my

presentation. Before I start my speech, let me ask you a question. By a show of hands, how many of you own a car?

Expressing thanks to the Chairperson 向主持人致谢

Mr. Chairman, thank you for your introduction.

First, I would like to thank Mr. Chairman for his gracious introduction.

Thank you very much, Prof. Fawcett, for your very kind introduction.

I would like to thank Dr. Huang (主持人或推荐你来发言的上司)for permitting me the privilege to speak to this audience.

Forms of Address and Greetings对听众的称呼

Distinguished colleagues, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning!

Members of the conference!

Expressing Pleasure and Honor 向听众致意

I am very happy/glad/pleased to be here in Hong Kong.

I am honored/privileged to be here (with you this afternoon).

I am proud to be here on this special occasion.

It’s a very great pleasure for me to be able to attend this conference.

I consider it a great honor to be asked to speak about …on this session of our symposium/ at this conference..

It is a great pleasure to be given the honor of first speaker on this important topic.

Others 细节,如确认话筒音量

Can you hear me all right?

Is my voice too loud?

Reference to the Audience 与听众呼应

I can see many of you are from …department.

I know many of you are familiar with this topic.

You all look as though you’ve heard this before.

I understand that you’ve all traveled a long way./ After hours of conference, you must feel a little tired. Now I’d like you to see an interesting topic…

II. Introducing the Subject and the outline of the Presentation引入话题 Background Information I would like to start by briefly reviewing the history of open heart surgery.

Let us start with the theoretical basis of this new technique.

To begin with, we have to consider the principle.

I think it would be best to start out by looking at a few slides.

I should like to preface my remarks with a de script ion of the basic idea.

May I begin with a general outline of this project?

The first thing I would like to talk about is the definition of the terms I shall use in my lecture. The first point I'd like to make is the historical background of the invention.

First, I shall explain to you why this new program is correct and feasible.

Topic

I would like to concentrate on theproblem Of antibiotic abuse in hospitals.

I shall devote my talk to the surgical treatment of coronary disease.

I want to confine my talk to the latest developments in civil engineering.

Today, I am going to give a talk on the application of computers in medicine.

My topic today will deal with the observation of supernova.

In today's talk, I' 11 restrict myself to the etiology of 15-epa~i;s.

In my presentation this morning, I' 11 limit myself to three major points only.

I take the liberty of restricting my discussion mainly to highway bridge construction.

Now, I would like to address myself to the most important aspect of this problem.

Among the many languages, I shall mention only BASIC.

What I am going to present today is the methodology and the data analysis.

I'm not going to say much about that except to discuss the literature on that topic.

Outlining

My talk today consists of two parts. One is... and the other is...

I've divided my presentation into four parts.

I shall first talk about ... and then touch on... and finally discuss ...

The subject can be looked at under the following headings: ... (Pointing to the PowerPoint display) I would like to divide my talk into two parts. The first part deals with…, the second part concerns ...

My presentation will be given in four parts. The first part deals with ... The second part relates to... The third part concerns ... And the last part discusses…

Purpose/Objective

The purpose of this presentation is to...

This talk is designed to…

Comprehensive Samples

Sample 1

Thank you, Mr. Chairperson, Mr. Director-General, distinguished members of the ILO's

Governing Body and friends. I welcome this opportunity to be here today, with an Organization which in many ways belongs to all of us workers. I can think of, in fact, no other international body that one can claim as one's own so unambiguously.

I have also had a longstanding formal association with the ILO. Many of my early pieces on

women and technological change and on land rights were published by the ILO, as well as was the work of many other scholars. It is therefore a pleasure for me to be here on this important Symposium.

The canvas of the Symposium is very large. I will focus on two aspects of gender inequality that centrally effect millions of women as workers but perhaps have failed to receive the attention they deserve. First, the gender gap in command over property and Productive assets and, second, gender biased social perceptions and social norms.

Sample 2

I learned last May that you have to be careful in speaking to a group of professional

communicators. After I conducted a writer' s workshop at the Toronto Conference of the

International Association of Business Communicators, Janine Lichaczwrote asked me to speak here tonight and used the communication techniques I had recommended. She even included a footnote citing my lecture. I am susceptible to good communication and to flattery so I am pleased to be with you to discuss your topic for the evening, the use of language in the art of speech writing.

I suppose we must begin by shaking our heads, woefully, over the sad state of language today, whether in formal speeches, casual conversation, or in writing. Most of us in this room no doubt agree with the generally negative tone of Time Magazine's year-end assessment which claims “our language has been besieged by vulgarities”. But to preserve our sanity as professionals in communication of us would probably join Time in optimistically expecting English somehow to survive and even to prosper.

Expressions on Other Occasions

Correcting the Title of the Presentation

First of all, I would like to mention that the title of my presentation should be ...

Please allow me to correct a mistake in the title of my speech which appeared in the program. Instead of... it should read...

Reading. Another Person's Paper

Sometimes you are selected to read another person's paper, as he or she is absent.

I shall read a paper by Dr. Li from Guangzhou, china, who regrets that he could not be here. The title of his paper is...

I'm going to read the paper by Dr. Wang. It's a great pity that, because of a health problem, he could not be here.

I was asked by the author to read his paper. He apologizes for not being able to come here. The next speaker, Prof. Zhang, regrets that she could not be here and has submitted her paper to me. I am not sure if I can present it as well as she expected.

I am not sure whether I' 11 be able to be very confident in answering specific questions. However, I am somewhat familiar with his work, so I' 11 try my best.

Checking the Microphone

First I want to check if all of you can hear me clearly.

Am I speaking clearly and loudly enough for those in the rear of the room?

I wonder if those in the rear of the room can hear me.

If those in the rear of the room can hear me, would someone please raise his hand?

Can you hear me clearly?

Can you hear me if I am away from the microphone?

Is the microphone working?

* Summary-How to Prepare a Good Introduction

Realize file great importance of the introduction of file presentation mad then do your best in delivering it.

Don' t make file introduction either too wordy, or too brief. Usually, it covers 10 to 15 percent of your entire speech.

Select tile ways to capture the audience attention.

Indicate tile topic.

Outline your Speech.

Announce your purpose.

Prepare several versions of tile introduction, compare them, and then select the best version. Finally, learn it by heart so as to be able to deliver it easily mid fluently.

Don't start your speech with apologies.

Pay attention to your body language.

Chapter II Developing the Speech Text I. Announcing the Beginning of the Speech Text To begin with, I would like to talk about a principle.

I think it would be best to start out by looking at some pictures.

The first thing I would like to talk about is the definition of the terms which I’11 use in my presentation.

II. Shifting to the Next Main Point

Well, let's move on to the next point.

We will now come to the second problem.

Turning to the next question, I' 11 talk about the stages of the procedure.

As the second topic, I shall stop here. Now let' s turn our attention to the third topic.

So much for the methodology of our experiment. I would now like to shift to the discussion of the results.

Now, let's move away from the first part and switch over to the next part of my presentation. That's all for the introduction and now we can go on to the literature review.

Next, I would like to turn to a more difficult problem.

The next point I'd like to talk about is the feasibility of this project.

That brings me to my second point.

I am glad that we can now leave this rather boring subject of mathematic deduction and go into a more attractive one, that is the application of the formula.

III. Resuming the Topic

Let' s come back to what I said in the first part of my speech.

Getting back to the subject of the problem of theoretical considerations we can find that... I want to return to the first part of my presentation.

Now, to get back to the effect of temperature, you may be aware that the problems have been solved.

This brings me back to the question of security.

At this point I would like to refer again to the question of methods in the first part of my lecture. Referring again to the first question, I think...

Referring to the Coming Point

I'll deal with it later.

I' 11 touch upon that point in a moment.

I shall tell you in detail shortly.

IV. Introducing the Supporting Materials

I think this part is the most difficult, so I'll explain it in greater detail.

I think this part of my paper is most important, so I plan to spend more time on it.

Please allow me to deal with this matter more extensively.

Being the most important part of my presentation, I will elaborate on it with more slides. I' 11 expand this topic with drawings and figures.

Indicating the Points Briefly

Limited by the time available, I can only give you a very brief account of this matter.

I don't think that I should describe the methods in detail, because they are included in the handout. I will not go into detail on it.

This point has been talked about repeatedly in this symposium, so I am not going to spend too much time on it.

Let's go through the following points very rapidly.

I just want to outline for you what I experienced in using this new drug.

I shall not go over all these explanations. My time is running short. So I'’11 be brief.

It is sufficient to say that these experiments were poorly designed and without controls. V. Repairing a Slip of Tone

The first of such experiments began in 2000, rather than 1999.

May I have the lights, I mean the slides.

The temperature increased, I shall say decreased.

The population is 13 million, sorry, 31 million.

The exchange rate dropped from 2.5 to 1.8, I beg your pardon, 1.9.

As you can see from the first row, excuse me, the second row, that the output increased two fold. VI. Expressions Concerning Audio-Visual Aids

Could we have the lights off? And the first slide, please.

Lights off, first slide, please.

Dim the lights, and first slide, please.

The slide is not so clear. Please darken the room a little more.

Could you please turn on the lights, please?

Now, we can have the lights on.

Please switch on the lights.

Lights on, please.

I apologize that this slide is not so clear, but I hope you can still make out the general idea. Sorry for the small print.

I'm sorry we left a figure out here.

VI. Explaining the Contents on the Slides

This slide demonstrates ...

On this slide, you can see...

This curve in this slide shows...

This figure in this slide exhibits...

This table on this slide presents...

This diagram on this slide depicts...

This chart on this slide displaces ...

The picture on this slide shows ...

The photomicrograph on this slide shows ...

The flow-chart on this slide points out...

The circuit diagram on this slide represents~...~

Indicating the Sources of the Content in a

This figure is taken from.., by Dr. Li.

This diagram is after that of Prof. Wang with some modification

VII. Demanding to Show the Next Slide

May I proceed to the next slide, please?

I think we can move on to the next slide.

Let me show you the next slide.

Now, we can go on to the next slide. '

Next slide, please.

Next, please.

Next !

部分人大代表上书最高法院,声称废除死刑是彰显一个国家文明进程的标志之一,中国是世界上少数存在死刑的国家。真TM 搞笑,废除死刑的直接后果是震慑恶劣犯罪行为和贪官的效力大打折扣,还有对那些因犯罪伤害死去的人是最大的侮辱。人大代表就是棒槌

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舒展☭2010-09-15 13:47

废除死刑就离亡国不远了回复

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:49

乱世当用重典。现在是礼不下庶人,刑不上大夫。处罚表面化,象征化。死刑变死缓,死缓变无期,无期变有期,有期被保释、提前释放回复

张子洲2010-09-15 13:50

人大都是干嘛吃的,去年就有人这么说,我觉得这是法治中国的最大悲哀,这些人大代表说话不动脑子回复

张溢中2010-09-15 13:50

为什么社会福利要结合国情,而对恶性犯罪的惩罚不结合国情呢?废除死刑不等同于尊重人权,除非一个国家的道德文明高度发达,它的人民很讲规则。回复 旺杰2010-09-15 13:51

很高兴能看到绝对正义的彰显,但是不管对与错或罪与罚,我们面对的都是生灵啊,有时候是隐形的制度在犯罪,而那些个我们认为的十恶不赦的人仅仅是链条而已甚至连链条都不是。

旺杰2010-09-15 13:51

不怜悯生灵存在的民族才是没有希望的民族。

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:56

对加害人的怜悯就是对受害人的进一步犯罪回复

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:56

保护罪犯的民族就是没有希望的民族回复

吴哲2010-09-15 13:59

回复旺杰: 太可笑是我对你回复的直观感受,见谅。怜悯要看对待事物的层面是什么,之所以判死刑,那么必定十恶不赦的罪行,试想,对那些死者的家属,这些人苟且是活着,是对生的,死的人最大的侮辱。废除死刑不可取回复 旺杰2010-09-15 13:59

回复舒展☭: 在你眼中是罪犯,在我眼中是生灵,谁都会犯错或犯罪,至于动机缘起,有时跟我们都有关系,整个制度设计的残酷才是真残酷,谁都无法持有完全的正义和完美的道德,所以只要你我对所谓“罪犯”的认知有偏差,你我的交流就是鸡同鸭讲。

吴哲2010-09-15 14:00

回复张溢中: 是,道德和文明高度发达,这是废除极刑的标杆之一,在很多欧洲国家这也是民众所能接受的回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:02

回复吴哲: 大可以大笑不止,也可以笑而不语,我只是在想一个对迫害致死的亡灵所做的抚慰却以牺牲一个性命而终结,这样的抚慰及悼念方式实在值得反思。 杜飞2010-09-15 14:04

回复旺杰: 废除死刑在中国现阶段的确很可悲 很好笑。回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:07

每个国家都有自己的国情,不要什么都学人家 等我们的国民素质真正的达到一定的高度的时候 不是不可以考虑的 ,我外那么多的党派为什么 这些人是不是

也提一提多党派执政呢 一群吃干饭的东西回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:10

“枪托砸头,头顶放炮,一月不睡,生不如死。”这是河南省商丘市柘城县农民赵作海讲述他遭刑讯逼供的细节。赵作海说:“打得受不了就认了。”这是(5月12日)《广州日报》对震惊全国的赵作海杀人冤案披露的最新细节。 孙生2010-09-15 14:11

我发现你这里发的文章都是很现实 很有针对性的东西啊 你是记者吗 ?回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 14:12

回复旺杰: 当下的中国还不能废除死刑。极少数专家坚持中国应立即废除所有死刑,即便在法学界,也难获多数人认同。严格控制死刑适用,逐步取消死刑罪名,显得更为务实,也更贴近中国国情。通俗的表达就是“不可不杀、不可多杀”。回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:12

回复魏子淋:杀几个该杀的就什么都有了回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:15

回复旺杰: 支持立即废除全部死刑论的精英们,有三个主要理由。一是人道主义;二是国际潮流;三是“民不畏死,奈何以死惧之。直白的说,民众都不怕死了,死刑还能吓唬谁呢?回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:15

我完全同意渐进的废除死刑,比如司法独立了,比如社会真的进步了,但不要一提死刑就反对,一提死刑就想着那些蒙冤致死人的黄泉安息问题,我只是想说我们似乎都是在一起的,但不能仗着绝对正义的论调而漠视生命个体的存在形式,中国不乏像赵作海这样被逼供的思想犯,数不胜数,所以那些”逼“们,... 旺杰2010-09-15 14:17

中国不乏像赵作海这样被逼供的死刑犯,数不胜数,所以那些”逼“们,不要张口闭口就喊“杀”,太没有生命感了。

旺杰2010-09-15 14:19

其次,我只是一个随时都可被蒸发的屁民,不是什么精英,我只用我所接受的文明和传统真心的在跟你们交流,在我们的文明中对死者的宽慰更多是好好活着持守善美地活着,而不是带着报复及恨意去消解什么问题,这不可能。 尚雍鼎2010-09-15 14:19

也就是说,我们还没有文明到废除死刑的程度!文明是因,废除死刑是果,我们不能本末倒置,单纯的认为,废除了死刑,我们就文明了!回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:21

回复旺杰: 所以你也说了 司法 和 社会 都进步了。但是中国的司法进程到现在都还没完善何谈独立呢?在这个普遍道德沦丧和人性泯灭的社会,死刑是唯一的能震慑他们的法律回复

孫晔mNx 2010-09-15 14:21

司法不独立 根本不能废除死刑 人权不是废除死刑就能提高的 回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:21

回复旺杰: 我则抱坚决的反对态度。刻意将“贪官”这样一个敏感的特殊主体,作为推动废除死刑的出发点,除了会挑动民怨,加剧阶层对立之外,于渐进废除死刑无任何益处。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:23

回复旺杰: 更所以 我们在讨论 你不用这么激动 还有用词注意文明 回复 旺杰2010-09-15 14:25

回复魏子淋:但是我们是否承认,死刑这一生杀大权掌握在哪一个主体手中,有几个大贪官被判死刑,即便有被判死刑的贪官,这后边的政治博弈你我都看清了吗?包括大商人们的死刑,所以也不仅仅是司法独立社会进步的问题,不要单挑贪官的问题来谈死刑,死刑的受众从比例上来讲贪官仅是再小不过的部分。 旺杰2010-09-15 14:25

抱歉,对那些个口中随便喊杀的人,我绝对会怒目金刚。

旺杰2010-09-15 14:28

人性的泯灭和道德的沦丧绝不是死刑可以维系和震慑的,如若是这样的逻辑治理,中国就彻底玩完。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:30

回复旺杰: 在单纯废除死刑这个事情上 没必要有太多争论,我看过南都周刊的一“是否支持减少死刑”的网络调查为例,反对方占到了92.3%。这样的比例,多年来没有太大的波动。 回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:31

那是,中国是没有信仰结构的社会,也是唯一将宗教与信仰相分离的国度,在这里拿网络民调谈死刑,这个一边倒的数据一点都不惊讶。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:33

回复旺杰: 我更希望你把这种对人性善良的解读和宽容用在当下回复 旺杰2010-09-15 14:35

呵呵,若有时间你去翻看我的日志吧,从414的玉树到舟曲,到持续七年从云南到陕北边区再到青海还有贵州的助学计划,我活在当下持守正义及良知的方式应该是常态,多谢提醒。

孙木易2010-09-15 14:40

说的对,废除死刑开玩笑,现在就要定法律,谁提废杀谁回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:41

回复孙木易:来杀我吧,我在兰州天水南路。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:41

回复旺杰: 自由的争论是通向真相的唯一道路。意识形态有不同 但不能阻止仰望星空的人交流回复

于婷婷♡❣2010-09-15 14:42

我们国家仍处于一个自欺欺人的阶段,像以前说自己国家是社会主义国家一样。国人究竟过的怎么样, 最底层的老百姓生活质量究竟怎么样,他们只关心GDP !一个虚拟的幸福指数!穷人越来越穷,富人越来越富!!悲剧!回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:43

回复旺杰: 我相信人家不是针对你的 别太敏感了回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:44

回复孙木易: 废除死刑 当下中国 的确不合适 回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:44

回复孫晔mNx: 一语中的回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:46

我很喜欢看你的日志或转发你的状态,但是我们都是凡人都会有不可避免的“我执”,我只想跟你做真诚的交流,而不是形而上的,就像你说教我活在当下,我向你汇报我当下的状态并提请你去翻看我的日志,我知道你不屑,但我不愿意仰望星空的人不实。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:46

回复孙生: 我是个打工的,是的 废除死刑对现有的我们来说 太不可接受了。但一党专政在当下还是最合适的回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:46

回复张溢中: 这条路我们还要走很长 很长回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:47

回复尚雍鼎: 废除死刑的文明 对我们来说还很长 先把物质文明 和精神文明搞上去再说吧 回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:48

多有冒犯 谅解 认识自己 认清自己是最重要的 人人七万的人气有时也会成为

蒙蔽你眼界的障碍 我们的障碍太多 世俗撕扯我们的也会更多

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:51

回复旺杰: 我表现的不够真诚吗?我有什么资格不屑呢,同是生活在一片蓝天下,争论是我们为了未来而做的基本诉求,收回你的道歉和误解。平等和正视是我们交流的第一步回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:54

我支持共产党 但是不完善的地方也希望能想到有效切实可行的办法解决回复 邱曌2010-09-15 15:09

其实废不废都一样的,都是该死的不死不该死的死了。在我国只要不是立即执行的死刑,再加上家里面权势大点都能放出来。回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:32

回复旺杰: 顶回复

程前2010-09-15 15:37

废除死刑意味着司法独立的路途更加没戏回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:37

回复孙木易: 那,哪天把你判个死刑吧,哥们回复

刘江2010-09-15 15:40

所以人大代表们只会以他们的意识去思考问题,他们代替不了人民回复 赵海军2010-09-15 15:40

回复魏子淋: 何以见得?回复

王江华2010-09-15 15:43

说实话我对你这句话很不赞成。我不认为只有杀死那些罪犯是对死去的人的最大侮辱!我也不认为不废除死刑就能震慑恶劣罪犯。比如说那些废除的文明国家,他们的廉洁程度要高出中国许多。。。我想我们应该考虑的是如何构建一个真正规范合理的国家制度,震慑贪官的方法有许多。请不要动不动就拿死刑说事。回复 赵海军2010-09-15 15:44

顶回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:47

我说哥们们,不论怎么争论我们都不应该漠视生命。回复

王江华2010-09-15 15:48

还有我觉得废除死刑的确是人类文明进步的标志。虽然说我不知道那些人大代表是怎么代表我们的,但是我相信人大代表并非都是棒槌。他们的知识程度生活阅

历社会见闻,我相信要比我们要高的多。虽然每年两会政协委员人大代表们都会提出一些不切实际的建议。但并非全部。请不要把人大代表们提的建议都当狗屎回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:50

恩,有时候需要向别人真诚的学习,不一定自己的见解都是对的。回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 15:54

回复王江华: 问题是,处在工业化和城镇化初级阶段的中国大陆,我们的社会文明程度、我们的治安状况、我们的社会心理承受能力,究竟是否达到了可以废除死刑的程度?国民是否愿意为废除死刑付出必要的社会成本?回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:54

回复王江华: 你们是否把手头的“中国每10万人中发生刑事杀人案件的件数”的统计数据―――请特别注意,是历史数据,不是某个特定时期(无论是“好的”或“坏的”时期的孤立数据,拿出来亮一亮,如果你们有的话?回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 15:55

回复王江华: 废除酷刑、废除死刑,是社会走向文明的结果,这本是常识。无奈国内某些自命学富五车之徒,却本末倒置,把它们当成了实现文明社会的条件。似乎废除了酷刑、死刑,中国就一步荣登“高度文明社会”,就实现了与国际主流社会完全接轨。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:55

回复王江华: 可惜的是,他们有意无意地忘记了那个用毛茸茸的胸膛温暖冻僵毒蛇的农夫回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:56

回复赵海军: 是的 大家各自有各自的看法 所以 自由争论是通向真理的唯一途径 回复

郭小伟2010-09-15 15:59

有一则故事讲某县开会讨论财政余款是该用于提高教育基础设施水平,还是改善监狱环境。在众代表议论纷纷,无法决断时。县长说:“大家就省省吧,这辈子我们还有机会进学校吗?”最终会议一致决议通过“改善监狱环境”!回复 郭小伟2010-09-15 16:01

当权者永远是把自己的利益放在至高点。回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:01

回复魏子淋: 呵呵,对,在你这找个平台,大家各抒己见回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:04

回复魏子淋:恩,这表示支持,但,死刑是应该废除的,只是时间的问题回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:06

回复郭小伟:黑色幽默回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:13

回复魏子淋: Yes,我承认现阶段的中国确实还不具备废除死刑的条件,但是我认为我们并不能因此就理所当然的什么事拿死刑做挡箭牌。其实经过那些已经废除死刑的国家的实验证明他们的治安情况起码没有恶化。回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:14

我认为我们应当思考的是怎样去完善这个社会制度,以使我们能够达到废除死刑的文明程度。而不是因为现阶段我们国家并不具备废除死刑的条件就将它一票否决掉。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 16:15

回复王江华: 是 我刚有日记 去看看。那是别的国家。我说的是中国。明白?回复

庄昊2010-09-15 16:24

一楼说的对回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:27

回复魏子淋: 我知道是中国 可是在这方面中国确实没有经验 只能拿一些国外的经验做参考。我也没说要照搬。废除死刑本来就需要一个很长的时间过程,我就是认为我们当下最需要想最需要做的是如何完善国家制度,提高社会文明,而不是有人提出要废除死刑就骂人家棒槌,毕竟死刑的废除只是一个时间的问题回复

成功英语演讲的秘诀:开场白、结束语

应对问题

-I will be pleased to answer any questions you may have at the end of the presentation. -Please can you save your questions till the end.

-If you have any questions, I will be pleased to answer them at the end of the presentation. -there will be time at the end of the presentation to answer your questions-so please feel free to ask me anything then.

-Don't hesitate to interrupt if you have a question.

-Please feel free to interrupt me at any time.

-Please stop me if you have any questions.

-If you need clarification on any point, you're welcome to ask questions at any time. -Can I come back to that point later?

-I will be coming to that point in a minute.

-That's a tricky question.

-We will go into details later. But just to give you an idea of...

-I am afraid there's no easy answer to that one...

-Yes, that's a very good point.

-Perhaps we could leave that point until the questions at the end of the presentation -I think I said that I would answer questions at the end of the presentation---perhaps you wouldn't mind waiting until then.

-I think we have time for just one more question

欢迎听众(正式)

- Welcome to our company

- I am pleased to be able to welcome you to our company...

- I'd like to thank you for coming.

- May I take this opportunity of thanking you for coming

欢迎听众(非正式 )

- I'm glad you could all get here...

- I'm glad to see so many people here.

- It's GREat to be back here.

- Hello again everybody. Thank you for being on time/making the effort to come today. - Welcome to X Part II.

受邀请在会议上致词

- I am delighted/pleased/glad to have the opportunity to present/of making this presentation...

- I am grateful for the opportunity to present...

- I'd like to thank you for inviting/asking me/giving me the chance to...

- Good morning/afternoon/evening ladies and gentleman

- It's my pleasant duty today to...

- I've been asked to...

告知演讲的话题

- the subject of my presentation is...

- I shall be speaking today about...

- My presentation concerns...

- Today's topic is...

- Today we are here to give a presentation on...

- Today we are here to talk about...Before we start, I'd like you meet my team members... - A brief look at today's agenda...(告诉听众所讲内容的先后顺序)

- Before we start our presentation, let's take a brief look at the agenda...

- I shall be offering a brief analysis of...

- the main area that I intend to cover in this presentation is...

- Take a moment and think of...

- Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about...

告诉听众发言的长度

- During the next ten minutes, I shall...

- I shall be speaking for about ten minutes...

- My presentation will last for about ten minutes...

- I won't take up more than ten minutes of your time...

- I don't intend to speak for longer than ten minutes...

- I know that time is short, so I intend to keep this brief

- I have a lot to cram in to the next ten minutes, so I'd better make a start...

引起听众的兴趣

- I'm going to be speaking about something that is vitally important to all of us. - My presentation will help solve a problem that has puzzled people for years...

- At the end of this presentation you will understand why this company has been so successful for so long...

- I am going to be talking about a product that could double your profit margins... - the next ten minutes will change your attitude to sales and marketing...

- Over the next ten minutes you are going to hear about something that will change the way your companies operate...

- By the end of this presentation you will know all there is to know about...

告诉听众内容要点

- there are five main aspects to this topic (...the first, ... the second, ...a third, ...another, ... the final)

- I am going to examine these topics in the following order (...first, ...next, ...after that, ...finally)

- I've divided my talk into five parts...

- I will deal with these topics in chronological order...

- I'm going to start with a general overview and then focus on this particular problem (...in general, ...more particularly).

- I want to start with this particular topic, and then draw some more general conclusions from it (...specifically, ... in a wider context).

- there are (a number of) factors that may affect...

- We have to take into account in any discussion of this subject, the following

considerations.

- We all ought to be aware of the following points.

结束语

-In conclusion, I'd like to...

-I'd like to finish by...

-Finally...

-By way of conclusion...

-I hope I have made myself understood

-I hope you have found this useful

-I hope this has given you some idea/clear idea/an outline of...

-Let me end by saying...

-That, then was all I had to say on...

-That concludes our presentation...

-I hope I've managed to give you a clearer picture of...

-If there are any questions, I'd be delighted to...

-Thank you for your attention...

-Let's break for a coffee at this point

-I am afraid that the clock is against us, so we had better stop here

-You have been a very attentive audience---thank you

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转帖二

做presentation ,我们要注意对话题的准备以及态度和身体语言等等,除此之外,我们还应该掌握一些常用句型。

1. Right, let's get started.

2. Let me introduce myself.

3. I've divided my presentation into three main parts.

4. Just to give you a brief overview.

5. I'll be saying more about this in a minute.

6. I'm sure the implications of this are clear to all of us.

7. There's an important point to be made here.

8. OK, let's move on. (go on to make your next point)

9. As you can see, the figures speak for themselves.

10. To go back to what I was saying earlier.

11. Are there any questions you'd like to ask at this point?

12. I'd like to look at this in more detail.

13. Let's put this into perspective. (to explain it this way)

14. Perhaps I should expand on that a little.

15. To digress for a moment? (to depart from your plan)

16. So, to sum up?

17. That brings me to the end of my talk.

18. Thank you. I'm sure you all have lots of questions.

转帖三 1. Greeting, name, position

Ladies and gentlemen. It’s an honor to have the opportunity to address such a distinguished audience.

Good morning. Let me start by saying just a few words about my own background. I started out in….

Good afternoon and thank you for making the effort to be here with us today.

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. It’s a pleasure to be with you today.

2. Ttile/Subject

I’d like to talk(to you) about….

I’m going to present the recent…

explain our position on…

brief you on….

inform you about…

describe…

The subject/focus/topic of my presentation….

We are here today to decide…

agree…

learn about….

The purpose of this talk is to update you on

put you in the picture about…

give you the background to…

3. Length

I shall only take …minutes of your time.

I plan to be brief.

This should only last …minutes.

4. Outline/Main parts

I’ve divided my presentation into four parts/sections. They are….

The subject can be looked at under the following headings:….

We can break this area down into the following fields:

First/First of all…

Secondly/then/next…

Thirdly/and then we come to…

Finally/lastly/last of all….

5. Questions

I’d be glad to answer any questions at the end of the my talk.

If you have any questions, please feel free to interrupt.

Please interrupt me if there’s something which needs clarifying. Otherwise, there’ll be time for discussion at the end

转帖四

I. Opening Remarks开场: Sample Opening Remarks

1) Thank you very much, Prof. Fawcett, for your very kind introduction. Mr.

Chairman, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning! I consider it a great honor to be asked to speak about …on this session of our symposium.

2) Ladies and gentleman. It’s an honor to have the opportunity to address such a distinguished audience.

3) Good morning. Let me start by saying just a few words about my own background.

4) Mr. Chairman, thank you very much for your kind introduction. President,

Distinguished colleagues, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning! Is my voice loud enough?

5) Good morning, everyone. I appreciate the opportunity to be with you today. I am here to talk to you about…

6) Good morning, everyone. I am very happy to have this chance to give my

presentation. Before I start my speech, let me ask you a question. By a show of hands, how many of you own a car?

Expressing thanks to the Chairperson 向主持人致谢

Mr. Chairman, thank you for your introduction.

First, I would like to thank Mr. Chairman for his gracious introduction.

Thank you very much, Prof. Fawcett, for your very kind introduction.

I would like to thank Dr. Huang (主持人或推荐你来发言的上司)for permitting me the privilege to speak to this audience.

Forms of Address and Greetings对听众的称呼

Distinguished colleagues, Ladies and gentleman, Good morning!

Members of the conference!

Expressing Pleasure and Honor 向听众致意

I am very happy/glad/pleased to be here in Hong Kong.

I am honored/privileged to be here (with you this afternoon).

I am proud to be here on this special occasion.

It’s a very great pleasure for me to be able to attend this conference.

I consider it a great honor to be asked to speak about …on this session of our symposium/ at this conference..

It is a great pleasure to be given the honor of first speaker on this important topic.

Others 细节,如确认话筒音量

Can you hear me all right?

Is my voice too loud?

Reference to the Audience 与听众呼应

I can see many of you are from …department.

I know many of you are familiar with this topic.

You all look as though you’ve heard this before.

I understand that you’ve all traveled a long way./ After hours of conference, you must feel a little tired. Now I’d like you to see an interesting topic…

II. Introducing the Subject and the outline of the Presentation引入话题 Background Information I would like to start by briefly reviewing the history of open heart surgery.

Let us start with the theoretical basis of this new technique.

To begin with, we have to consider the principle.

I think it would be best to start out by looking at a few slides.

I should like to preface my remarks with a de script ion of the basic idea.

May I begin with a general outline of this project?

The first thing I would like to talk about is the definition of the terms I shall use in my lecture. The first point I'd like to make is the historical background of the invention.

First, I shall explain to you why this new program is correct and feasible.

Topic

I would like to concentrate on theproblem Of antibiotic abuse in hospitals.

I shall devote my talk to the surgical treatment of coronary disease.

I want to confine my talk to the latest developments in civil engineering.

Today, I am going to give a talk on the application of computers in medicine.

My topic today will deal with the observation of supernova.

In today's talk, I' 11 restrict myself to the etiology of 15-epa~i;s.

In my presentation this morning, I' 11 limit myself to three major points only.

I take the liberty of restricting my discussion mainly to highway bridge construction.

Now, I would like to address myself to the most important aspect of this problem.

Among the many languages, I shall mention only BASIC.

What I am going to present today is the methodology and the data analysis.

I'm not going to say much about that except to discuss the literature on that topic.

Outlining

My talk today consists of two parts. One is... and the other is...

I've divided my presentation into four parts.

I shall first talk about ... and then touch on... and finally discuss ...

The subject can be looked at under the following headings: ... (Pointing to the PowerPoint display) I would like to divide my talk into two parts. The first part deals with…, the second part concerns ...

My presentation will be given in four parts. The first part deals with ... The second part relates to... The third part concerns ... And the last part discusses…

Purpose/Objective

The purpose of this presentation is to...

This talk is designed to…

Comprehensive Samples

Sample 1

Thank you, Mr. Chairperson, Mr. Director-General, distinguished members of the ILO's

Governing Body and friends. I welcome this opportunity to be here today, with an Organization which in many ways belongs to all of us workers. I can think of, in fact, no other international body that one can claim as one's own so unambiguously.

I have also had a longstanding formal association with the ILO. Many of my early pieces on

women and technological change and on land rights were published by the ILO, as well as was the work of many other scholars. It is therefore a pleasure for me to be here on this important Symposium.

The canvas of the Symposium is very large. I will focus on two aspects of gender inequality that centrally effect millions of women as workers but perhaps have failed to receive the attention they deserve. First, the gender gap in command over property and Productive assets and, second, gender biased social perceptions and social norms.

Sample 2

I learned last May that you have to be careful in speaking to a group of professional

communicators. After I conducted a writer' s workshop at the Toronto Conference of the

International Association of Business Communicators, Janine Lichaczwrote asked me to speak here tonight and used the communication techniques I had recommended. She even included a footnote citing my lecture. I am susceptible to good communication and to flattery so I am pleased to be with you to discuss your topic for the evening, the use of language in the art of speech writing.

I suppose we must begin by shaking our heads, woefully, over the sad state of language today, whether in formal speeches, casual conversation, or in writing. Most of us in this room no doubt agree with the generally negative tone of Time Magazine's year-end assessment which claims “our language has been besieged by vulgarities”. But to preserve our sanity as professionals in communication of us would probably join Time in optimistically expecting English somehow to survive and even to prosper.

Expressions on Other Occasions

Correcting the Title of the Presentation

First of all, I would like to mention that the title of my presentation should be ...

Please allow me to correct a mistake in the title of my speech which appeared in the program. Instead of... it should read...

Reading. Another Person's Paper

Sometimes you are selected to read another person's paper, as he or she is absent.

I shall read a paper by Dr. Li from Guangzhou, china, who regrets that he could not be here. The title of his paper is...

I'm going to read the paper by Dr. Wang. It's a great pity that, because of a health problem, he could not be here.

I was asked by the author to read his paper. He apologizes for not being able to come here. The next speaker, Prof. Zhang, regrets that she could not be here and has submitted her paper to me. I am not sure if I can present it as well as she expected.

I am not sure whether I' 11 be able to be very confident in answering specific questions. However, I am somewhat familiar with his work, so I' 11 try my best.

Checking the Microphone

First I want to check if all of you can hear me clearly.

Am I speaking clearly and loudly enough for those in the rear of the room?

I wonder if those in the rear of the room can hear me.

If those in the rear of the room can hear me, would someone please raise his hand?

Can you hear me clearly?

Can you hear me if I am away from the microphone?

Is the microphone working?

* Summary-How to Prepare a Good Introduction

Realize file great importance of the introduction of file presentation mad then do your best in delivering it.

Don' t make file introduction either too wordy, or too brief. Usually, it covers 10 to 15 percent of your entire speech.

Select tile ways to capture the audience attention.

Indicate tile topic.

Outline your Speech.

Announce your purpose.

Prepare several versions of tile introduction, compare them, and then select the best version. Finally, learn it by heart so as to be able to deliver it easily mid fluently.

Don't start your speech with apologies.

Pay attention to your body language.

Chapter II Developing the Speech Text I. Announcing the Beginning of the Speech Text To begin with, I would like to talk about a principle.

I think it would be best to start out by looking at some pictures.

The first thing I would like to talk about is the definition of the terms which I’11 use in my presentation.

II. Shifting to the Next Main Point

Well, let's move on to the next point.

We will now come to the second problem.

Turning to the next question, I' 11 talk about the stages of the procedure.

As the second topic, I shall stop here. Now let' s turn our attention to the third topic.

So much for the methodology of our experiment. I would now like to shift to the discussion of the results.

Now, let's move away from the first part and switch over to the next part of my presentation. That's all for the introduction and now we can go on to the literature review.

Next, I would like to turn to a more difficult problem.

The next point I'd like to talk about is the feasibility of this project.

That brings me to my second point.

I am glad that we can now leave this rather boring subject of mathematic deduction and go into a more attractive one, that is the application of the formula.

III. Resuming the Topic

Let' s come back to what I said in the first part of my speech.

Getting back to the subject of the problem of theoretical considerations we can find that... I want to return to the first part of my presentation.

Now, to get back to the effect of temperature, you may be aware that the problems have been solved.

This brings me back to the question of security.

At this point I would like to refer again to the question of methods in the first part of my lecture. Referring again to the first question, I think...

Referring to the Coming Point

I'll deal with it later.

I' 11 touch upon that point in a moment.

I shall tell you in detail shortly.

IV. Introducing the Supporting Materials

I think this part is the most difficult, so I'll explain it in greater detail.

I think this part of my paper is most important, so I plan to spend more time on it.

Please allow me to deal with this matter more extensively.

Being the most important part of my presentation, I will elaborate on it with more slides. I' 11 expand this topic with drawings and figures.

Indicating the Points Briefly

Limited by the time available, I can only give you a very brief account of this matter.

I don't think that I should describe the methods in detail, because they are included in the handout. I will not go into detail on it.

This point has been talked about repeatedly in this symposium, so I am not going to spend too much time on it.

Let's go through the following points very rapidly.

I just want to outline for you what I experienced in using this new drug.

I shall not go over all these explanations. My time is running short. So I'’11 be brief.

It is sufficient to say that these experiments were poorly designed and without controls. V. Repairing a Slip of Tone

The first of such experiments began in 2000, rather than 1999.

May I have the lights, I mean the slides.

The temperature increased, I shall say decreased.

The population is 13 million, sorry, 31 million.

The exchange rate dropped from 2.5 to 1.8, I beg your pardon, 1.9.

As you can see from the first row, excuse me, the second row, that the output increased two fold. VI. Expressions Concerning Audio-Visual Aids

Could we have the lights off? And the first slide, please.

Lights off, first slide, please.

Dim the lights, and first slide, please.

The slide is not so clear. Please darken the room a little more.

Could you please turn on the lights, please?

Now, we can have the lights on.

Please switch on the lights.

Lights on, please.

I apologize that this slide is not so clear, but I hope you can still make out the general idea. Sorry for the small print.

I'm sorry we left a figure out here.

VI. Explaining the Contents on the Slides

This slide demonstrates ...

On this slide, you can see...

This curve in this slide shows...

This figure in this slide exhibits...

This table on this slide presents...

This diagram on this slide depicts...

This chart on this slide displaces ...

The picture on this slide shows ...

The photomicrograph on this slide shows ...

The flow-chart on this slide points out...

The circuit diagram on this slide represents~...~

Indicating the Sources of the Content in a

This figure is taken from.., by Dr. Li.

This diagram is after that of Prof. Wang with some modification

VII. Demanding to Show the Next Slide

May I proceed to the next slide, please?

I think we can move on to the next slide.

Let me show you the next slide.

Now, we can go on to the next slide. '

Next slide, please.

Next, please.

Next !

部分人大代表上书最高法院,声称废除死刑是彰显一个国家文明进程的标志之一,中国是世界上少数存在死刑的国家。真TM 搞笑,废除死刑的直接后果是震慑恶劣犯罪行为和贪官的效力大打折扣,还有对那些因犯罪伤害死去的人是最大的侮辱。人大代表就是棒槌

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舒展☭2010-09-15 13:47

废除死刑就离亡国不远了回复

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:49

乱世当用重典。现在是礼不下庶人,刑不上大夫。处罚表面化,象征化。死刑变死缓,死缓变无期,无期变有期,有期被保释、提前释放回复

张子洲2010-09-15 13:50

人大都是干嘛吃的,去年就有人这么说,我觉得这是法治中国的最大悲哀,这些人大代表说话不动脑子回复

张溢中2010-09-15 13:50

为什么社会福利要结合国情,而对恶性犯罪的惩罚不结合国情呢?废除死刑不等同于尊重人权,除非一个国家的道德文明高度发达,它的人民很讲规则。回复 旺杰2010-09-15 13:51

很高兴能看到绝对正义的彰显,但是不管对与错或罪与罚,我们面对的都是生灵啊,有时候是隐形的制度在犯罪,而那些个我们认为的十恶不赦的人仅仅是链条而已甚至连链条都不是。

旺杰2010-09-15 13:51

不怜悯生灵存在的民族才是没有希望的民族。

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:56

对加害人的怜悯就是对受害人的进一步犯罪回复

舒展☭2010-09-15 13:56

保护罪犯的民族就是没有希望的民族回复

吴哲2010-09-15 13:59

回复旺杰: 太可笑是我对你回复的直观感受,见谅。怜悯要看对待事物的层面是什么,之所以判死刑,那么必定十恶不赦的罪行,试想,对那些死者的家属,这些人苟且是活着,是对生的,死的人最大的侮辱。废除死刑不可取回复 旺杰2010-09-15 13:59

回复舒展☭: 在你眼中是罪犯,在我眼中是生灵,谁都会犯错或犯罪,至于动机缘起,有时跟我们都有关系,整个制度设计的残酷才是真残酷,谁都无法持有完全的正义和完美的道德,所以只要你我对所谓“罪犯”的认知有偏差,你我的交流就是鸡同鸭讲。

吴哲2010-09-15 14:00

回复张溢中: 是,道德和文明高度发达,这是废除极刑的标杆之一,在很多欧洲国家这也是民众所能接受的回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:02

回复吴哲: 大可以大笑不止,也可以笑而不语,我只是在想一个对迫害致死的亡灵所做的抚慰却以牺牲一个性命而终结,这样的抚慰及悼念方式实在值得反思。 杜飞2010-09-15 14:04

回复旺杰: 废除死刑在中国现阶段的确很可悲 很好笑。回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:07

每个国家都有自己的国情,不要什么都学人家 等我们的国民素质真正的达到一定的高度的时候 不是不可以考虑的 ,我外那么多的党派为什么 这些人是不是

也提一提多党派执政呢 一群吃干饭的东西回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:10

“枪托砸头,头顶放炮,一月不睡,生不如死。”这是河南省商丘市柘城县农民赵作海讲述他遭刑讯逼供的细节。赵作海说:“打得受不了就认了。”这是(5月12日)《广州日报》对震惊全国的赵作海杀人冤案披露的最新细节。 孙生2010-09-15 14:11

我发现你这里发的文章都是很现实 很有针对性的东西啊 你是记者吗 ?回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 14:12

回复旺杰: 当下的中国还不能废除死刑。极少数专家坚持中国应立即废除所有死刑,即便在法学界,也难获多数人认同。严格控制死刑适用,逐步取消死刑罪名,显得更为务实,也更贴近中国国情。通俗的表达就是“不可不杀、不可多杀”。回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:12

回复魏子淋:杀几个该杀的就什么都有了回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:15

回复旺杰: 支持立即废除全部死刑论的精英们,有三个主要理由。一是人道主义;二是国际潮流;三是“民不畏死,奈何以死惧之。直白的说,民众都不怕死了,死刑还能吓唬谁呢?回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:15

我完全同意渐进的废除死刑,比如司法独立了,比如社会真的进步了,但不要一提死刑就反对,一提死刑就想着那些蒙冤致死人的黄泉安息问题,我只是想说我们似乎都是在一起的,但不能仗着绝对正义的论调而漠视生命个体的存在形式,中国不乏像赵作海这样被逼供的思想犯,数不胜数,所以那些”逼“们,... 旺杰2010-09-15 14:17

中国不乏像赵作海这样被逼供的死刑犯,数不胜数,所以那些”逼“们,不要张口闭口就喊“杀”,太没有生命感了。

旺杰2010-09-15 14:19

其次,我只是一个随时都可被蒸发的屁民,不是什么精英,我只用我所接受的文明和传统真心的在跟你们交流,在我们的文明中对死者的宽慰更多是好好活着持守善美地活着,而不是带着报复及恨意去消解什么问题,这不可能。 尚雍鼎2010-09-15 14:19

也就是说,我们还没有文明到废除死刑的程度!文明是因,废除死刑是果,我们不能本末倒置,单纯的认为,废除了死刑,我们就文明了!回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:21

回复旺杰: 所以你也说了 司法 和 社会 都进步了。但是中国的司法进程到现在都还没完善何谈独立呢?在这个普遍道德沦丧和人性泯灭的社会,死刑是唯一的能震慑他们的法律回复

孫晔mNx 2010-09-15 14:21

司法不独立 根本不能废除死刑 人权不是废除死刑就能提高的 回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:21

回复旺杰: 我则抱坚决的反对态度。刻意将“贪官”这样一个敏感的特殊主体,作为推动废除死刑的出发点,除了会挑动民怨,加剧阶层对立之外,于渐进废除死刑无任何益处。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:23

回复旺杰: 更所以 我们在讨论 你不用这么激动 还有用词注意文明 回复 旺杰2010-09-15 14:25

回复魏子淋:但是我们是否承认,死刑这一生杀大权掌握在哪一个主体手中,有几个大贪官被判死刑,即便有被判死刑的贪官,这后边的政治博弈你我都看清了吗?包括大商人们的死刑,所以也不仅仅是司法独立社会进步的问题,不要单挑贪官的问题来谈死刑,死刑的受众从比例上来讲贪官仅是再小不过的部分。 旺杰2010-09-15 14:25

抱歉,对那些个口中随便喊杀的人,我绝对会怒目金刚。

旺杰2010-09-15 14:28

人性的泯灭和道德的沦丧绝不是死刑可以维系和震慑的,如若是这样的逻辑治理,中国就彻底玩完。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:30

回复旺杰: 在单纯废除死刑这个事情上 没必要有太多争论,我看过南都周刊的一“是否支持减少死刑”的网络调查为例,反对方占到了92.3%。这样的比例,多年来没有太大的波动。 回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:31

那是,中国是没有信仰结构的社会,也是唯一将宗教与信仰相分离的国度,在这里拿网络民调谈死刑,这个一边倒的数据一点都不惊讶。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:33

回复旺杰: 我更希望你把这种对人性善良的解读和宽容用在当下回复 旺杰2010-09-15 14:35

呵呵,若有时间你去翻看我的日志吧,从414的玉树到舟曲,到持续七年从云南到陕北边区再到青海还有贵州的助学计划,我活在当下持守正义及良知的方式应该是常态,多谢提醒。

孙木易2010-09-15 14:40

说的对,废除死刑开玩笑,现在就要定法律,谁提废杀谁回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:41

回复孙木易:来杀我吧,我在兰州天水南路。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:41

回复旺杰: 自由的争论是通向真相的唯一道路。意识形态有不同 但不能阻止仰望星空的人交流回复

于婷婷♡❣2010-09-15 14:42

我们国家仍处于一个自欺欺人的阶段,像以前说自己国家是社会主义国家一样。国人究竟过的怎么样, 最底层的老百姓生活质量究竟怎么样,他们只关心GDP !一个虚拟的幸福指数!穷人越来越穷,富人越来越富!!悲剧!回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:43

回复旺杰: 我相信人家不是针对你的 别太敏感了回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:44

回复孙木易: 废除死刑 当下中国 的确不合适 回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:44

回复孫晔mNx: 一语中的回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:46

我很喜欢看你的日志或转发你的状态,但是我们都是凡人都会有不可避免的“我执”,我只想跟你做真诚的交流,而不是形而上的,就像你说教我活在当下,我向你汇报我当下的状态并提请你去翻看我的日志,我知道你不屑,但我不愿意仰望星空的人不实。

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:46

回复孙生: 我是个打工的,是的 废除死刑对现有的我们来说 太不可接受了。但一党专政在当下还是最合适的回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:46

回复张溢中: 这条路我们还要走很长 很长回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:47

回复尚雍鼎: 废除死刑的文明 对我们来说还很长 先把物质文明 和精神文明搞上去再说吧 回复

旺杰2010-09-15 14:48

多有冒犯 谅解 认识自己 认清自己是最重要的 人人七万的人气有时也会成为

蒙蔽你眼界的障碍 我们的障碍太多 世俗撕扯我们的也会更多

魏子淋2010-09-15 14:51

回复旺杰: 我表现的不够真诚吗?我有什么资格不屑呢,同是生活在一片蓝天下,争论是我们为了未来而做的基本诉求,收回你的道歉和误解。平等和正视是我们交流的第一步回复

孙生2010-09-15 14:54

我支持共产党 但是不完善的地方也希望能想到有效切实可行的办法解决回复 邱曌2010-09-15 15:09

其实废不废都一样的,都是该死的不死不该死的死了。在我国只要不是立即执行的死刑,再加上家里面权势大点都能放出来。回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:32

回复旺杰: 顶回复

程前2010-09-15 15:37

废除死刑意味着司法独立的路途更加没戏回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:37

回复孙木易: 那,哪天把你判个死刑吧,哥们回复

刘江2010-09-15 15:40

所以人大代表们只会以他们的意识去思考问题,他们代替不了人民回复 赵海军2010-09-15 15:40

回复魏子淋: 何以见得?回复

王江华2010-09-15 15:43

说实话我对你这句话很不赞成。我不认为只有杀死那些罪犯是对死去的人的最大侮辱!我也不认为不废除死刑就能震慑恶劣罪犯。比如说那些废除的文明国家,他们的廉洁程度要高出中国许多。。。我想我们应该考虑的是如何构建一个真正规范合理的国家制度,震慑贪官的方法有许多。请不要动不动就拿死刑说事。回复 赵海军2010-09-15 15:44

顶回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:47

我说哥们们,不论怎么争论我们都不应该漠视生命。回复

王江华2010-09-15 15:48

还有我觉得废除死刑的确是人类文明进步的标志。虽然说我不知道那些人大代表是怎么代表我们的,但是我相信人大代表并非都是棒槌。他们的知识程度生活阅

历社会见闻,我相信要比我们要高的多。虽然每年两会政协委员人大代表们都会提出一些不切实际的建议。但并非全部。请不要把人大代表们提的建议都当狗屎回复

赵海军2010-09-15 15:50

恩,有时候需要向别人真诚的学习,不一定自己的见解都是对的。回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 15:54

回复王江华: 问题是,处在工业化和城镇化初级阶段的中国大陆,我们的社会文明程度、我们的治安状况、我们的社会心理承受能力,究竟是否达到了可以废除死刑的程度?国民是否愿意为废除死刑付出必要的社会成本?回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:54

回复王江华: 你们是否把手头的“中国每10万人中发生刑事杀人案件的件数”的统计数据―――请特别注意,是历史数据,不是某个特定时期(无论是“好的”或“坏的”时期的孤立数据,拿出来亮一亮,如果你们有的话?回复 魏子淋2010-09-15 15:55

回复王江华: 废除酷刑、废除死刑,是社会走向文明的结果,这本是常识。无奈国内某些自命学富五车之徒,却本末倒置,把它们当成了实现文明社会的条件。似乎废除了酷刑、死刑,中国就一步荣登“高度文明社会”,就实现了与国际主流社会完全接轨。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:55

回复王江华: 可惜的是,他们有意无意地忘记了那个用毛茸茸的胸膛温暖冻僵毒蛇的农夫回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 15:56

回复赵海军: 是的 大家各自有各自的看法 所以 自由争论是通向真理的唯一途径 回复

郭小伟2010-09-15 15:59

有一则故事讲某县开会讨论财政余款是该用于提高教育基础设施水平,还是改善监狱环境。在众代表议论纷纷,无法决断时。县长说:“大家就省省吧,这辈子我们还有机会进学校吗?”最终会议一致决议通过“改善监狱环境”!回复 郭小伟2010-09-15 16:01

当权者永远是把自己的利益放在至高点。回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:01

回复魏子淋: 呵呵,对,在你这找个平台,大家各抒己见回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:04

回复魏子淋:恩,这表示支持,但,死刑是应该废除的,只是时间的问题回复

赵海军2010-09-15 16:06

回复郭小伟:黑色幽默回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:13

回复魏子淋: Yes,我承认现阶段的中国确实还不具备废除死刑的条件,但是我认为我们并不能因此就理所当然的什么事拿死刑做挡箭牌。其实经过那些已经废除死刑的国家的实验证明他们的治安情况起码没有恶化。回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:14

我认为我们应当思考的是怎样去完善这个社会制度,以使我们能够达到废除死刑的文明程度。而不是因为现阶段我们国家并不具备废除死刑的条件就将它一票否决掉。回复

魏子淋2010-09-15 16:15

回复王江华: 是 我刚有日记 去看看。那是别的国家。我说的是中国。明白?回复

庄昊2010-09-15 16:24

一楼说的对回复

王江华2010-09-15 16:27

回复魏子淋: 我知道是中国 可是在这方面中国确实没有经验 只能拿一些国外的经验做参考。我也没说要照搬。废除死刑本来就需要一个很长的时间过程,我就是认为我们当下最需要想最需要做的是如何完善国家制度,提高社会文明,而不是有人提出要废除死刑就骂人家棒槌,毕竟死刑的废除只是一个时间的问题回复


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