TEM4-1作文赏析

[1]专四作文范文: Crisis

 Crisis is to our life what illness is to our body. Just as fatal (1)disease can destroy(2) our body and sometimes even(3) put an end to our lives, so does(表示强调) smashing(猛烈的) crisis knock us down so hopelessly(4) that we might never have chance of standing up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category(5). They, like occasional ailments(疾病) which sometimes can bolster (6)our body's immune(免疫的,免除的) system,are mostly minor(次要的) and surmountable(可战胜的) and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing(福气,祷告) to us, too.

As far as a nation is concerned, crisis can be beneficial. Take Wenchuan earthquake which shook most of Sichuan recently for example.

(7) The crisis has cost us Chinese a lot. Houses collapsed(倒塌), bridges broke down and many affected(受影响的) areas were cut off from the outside world. Nearly a million people lost their homes, ten thousands of people were injured and another ten thousands of people were killed. But our sufferings(苦难、痛苦) won't go in vain(8). Scientists are more determined(9) to improve the means(方法,注意一定要加s) by which we forecast(预报) earthquakes with more accuracy准确. We should build houses which can survive the destructive(10) earthquakes.

As for economic life, crises are not always rendered bad. During these times, we can stop the race of fast economy to speculate(11) about some fundamental (基本的,基础的)issues of humanity(人类) such as(举例) how much high-speed development in this way can contribute to the well-being of human life. Just take my own country for instance(12). Of course, in the past two decades or so(左右), our economy has gained (13)the highest speed man has experienced. But haven't we paid too much? Our rivers are polluted. Our natural resources are shrinking. Our national power of creation is drained(14). Is it worthy of it? Isn't it high time(15) we gave it a serious thought? Shouldn't we stop making ourselves long in quantity and short in quality? And chance of deep thought has come with this crisis, which is now deepening in most parts of the world.

As a well-known ancient Chinese notion (16)goes, the past lessons if not forgotten can be good teachers for us all(熟记). If we can bear in mind the various sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded and those of our compatriots who was killed in the earthquake did not die in vain. We should take the lessons from crisis and regard them as a chance for new growth.

1记住,致命的

2还可以用什么?我给你整理的

3连接词处的用法注意

4记 要会用adv.绝望的,无望的

5种类,范畴,注意和strategy n 策略的区别 不要记混了

6支持、支撑 记住

7注意举例子的说法 take····for example 以什么为例

8徒劳的 in vain 做什么是徒劳的 记住

9下定决心做某事 be~to do

10毁灭性的 破坏性的 记住

11v.推断

12举例的说法 注意 和前面的相似与区别

13获得,记住

14流失的过去式过去分词

15一种固定用法 it is high time that +句子(一般是一般现在时)到了做了····的时间或者是时候去做某事了 要记住 会用

16记忆,不要总是用以前的说法

[1]专四作文范文: Crisis

 Crisis is to our life what illness is to our body. Just as fatal (1)disease can destroy(2) our body and sometimes even(3) put an end to our lives, so does(表示强调) smashing(猛烈的) crisis knock us down so hopelessly(4) that we might never have chance of standing up again. However, most crises that frequent us in life are not such category(5). They, like occasional ailments(疾病) which sometimes can bolster (6)our body's immune(免疫的,免除的) system,are mostly minor(次要的) and surmountable(可战胜的) and therefore making us hardy enough to survive whatever adversities in our later life. Even those serious crises, if handled properly, can be turned to a blessing(福气,祷告) to us, too.

As far as a nation is concerned, crisis can be beneficial. Take Wenchuan earthquake which shook most of Sichuan recently for example.

(7) The crisis has cost us Chinese a lot. Houses collapsed(倒塌), bridges broke down and many affected(受影响的) areas were cut off from the outside world. Nearly a million people lost their homes, ten thousands of people were injured and another ten thousands of people were killed. But our sufferings(苦难、痛苦) won't go in vain(8). Scientists are more determined(9) to improve the means(方法,注意一定要加s) by which we forecast(预报) earthquakes with more accuracy准确. We should build houses which can survive the destructive(10) earthquakes.

As for economic life, crises are not always rendered bad. During these times, we can stop the race of fast economy to speculate(11) about some fundamental (基本的,基础的)issues of humanity(人类) such as(举例) how much high-speed development in this way can contribute to the well-being of human life. Just take my own country for instance(12). Of course, in the past two decades or so(左右), our economy has gained (13)the highest speed man has experienced. But haven't we paid too much? Our rivers are polluted. Our natural resources are shrinking. Our national power of creation is drained(14). Is it worthy of it? Isn't it high time(15) we gave it a serious thought? Shouldn't we stop making ourselves long in quantity and short in quality? And chance of deep thought has come with this crisis, which is now deepening in most parts of the world.

As a well-known ancient Chinese notion (16)goes, the past lessons if not forgotten can be good teachers for us all(熟记). If we can bear in mind the various sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded and those of our compatriots who was killed in the earthquake did not die in vain. We should take the lessons from crisis and regard them as a chance for new growth.

1记住,致命的

2还可以用什么?我给你整理的

3连接词处的用法注意

4记 要会用adv.绝望的,无望的

5种类,范畴,注意和strategy n 策略的区别 不要记混了

6支持、支撑 记住

7注意举例子的说法 take····for example 以什么为例

8徒劳的 in vain 做什么是徒劳的 记住

9下定决心做某事 be~to do

10毁灭性的 破坏性的 记住

11v.推断

12举例的说法 注意 和前面的相似与区别

13获得,记住

14流失的过去式过去分词

15一种固定用法 it is high time that +句子(一般是一般现在时)到了做了····的时间或者是时候去做某事了 要记住 会用

16记忆,不要总是用以前的说法


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