英语说明文及范文点评
【要求】
要求：假设你是一名图书馆的工作人员，请写一篇文章说明文，介绍图书的借阅规则。字数在80100字之间。
【范文】
Something You Must Know
This library is and English Language teaching and learning librany. If you want to borrow some books, you must fill out a library application form and put it in the box on the librarian's desk. Because of the large number of applications we receive each week, you must wait one week. Please bring yor student or work card to pick up your library card. Library application forms which are not picked up within 2 months will be discarded and you will have to reapply.
【评语】
本文的借书规则表述得比较清晰，注意到了说明文语言的精练准确、通俗易懂的特点。对于高中生而言，这是一篇优秀的应试作文。
There is no indefinite liberty.
【要求】
要求：小程原来英语成绩很差，自从他参加了学校的英语角，成绩有了很大的进步，尤其是听力和口语提高更是迅速。请你代小程写一篇短文，介绍一下英语角的情况。
【范文】
English Corner
English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English. Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking. The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking.
English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends. When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common; that is they wanted to communicate in English. So the atmosphere was relaxing.
English Corner enlarges our would. As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we can't learn from books.
【评语】
本文第一段是总领段，点明了English Corner 在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了English Corner如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，无华丽词汇之堆砌，但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。
Without you ,it would have never been possible. Thank you.
【要求】
请用英语写一篇关于你校的校园平面图（diagram
教师办公室在教学楼三楼。
学校四周是树。
字数：100
【范文】
This is a diagram of our schoolyard. It is four hundred meters long and three hundred meters wide. The school gate faces the south. Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school yard. It is a building of five stories .The teachers' offices are on the third floor.
There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is our library. Our lab is on the right of the garden. There is a large playground behind the teaching building. Many trees are planted
around the school-yard.
【评语】
本文按照由外到内、由前往后的顺序进行介绍说明，使文章层次分明，脉胳清晰，说明简短有力。
Brevity is the soul of wit. 文以简洁为贵
English Dictionaries
【要求】
English Dictionariesspelling）；发音（pronunciation）和意项（meanings）。请你写一短文向别人介绍一本普通的英文字典。
【范文】
English Dictionaries
Most English dictionaries will tell you a number of things about the
language.
There are three important things, spelling, pronunciation and meanings. The first is the spelling of the words. If you are not sure about the
spelling of a word, you can try to find the correct spelling in a
dictionary. The words are always given in alphabetical order.
The second thing is pronunciation, Most dictionaries give the pronunciation of a word in a special kind of alphabet, which is called phonetic.
The third thing a dictionary will tell you is the meanings of words,Many
words have more than one meaning, and a good dictionary will explain all of the word's meanings.
These are some of the important facts that you can learn from dictionaries.
【评语】
本文抓住了英文字典的三个方面的主要内容进行阐述，采用总—分—总的结构方式组织材料，显得结构严谨。文章紧扣字典的主要特点进行说明，显得重点突出，对字典有一清晰的认识。
“barbecue”是日常生活中常见的一种食品，想知道是什么就去查字典吧。
Hans Christian Anderson
【要求】
请根据下列内容和所给单词及词组，用英语写一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生
（Hans Christian Anderson100——120。内容提示：安徒生生于1805年。十一岁丧
父。由于家境贫困，童年时代没能上学，开始跟人学习缝纫。十四岁时到一剧院工作。后来在一些热心的艺术家的帮助下，上了学。1828年接受高等教育，毕业后献身文学（literature）。他写剧本、小说、诗歌等等。他努力创作，获得很大成功。一生共创作160多个故事。1875年去世。
Words and Expressions to Be Used:
world-famous devote oneself to fairy tales
by the time advanced education lead to
【范文】
Hans Christian Anderson
Hans Christian Anderson was a world-famous writer of fairy tales. He was born in 1805. When he was eleven his father died. His family was then so poor that he could not go to school during his childhood. He learned sewing from a tailor.
At the age of fourteen, he went to work in a theatre. Later helped by some warm-hearted artists, he went to school. In 1828, he began to get advanced education.
After graduation, he devoted himself to literature. He wrote plays, novels, poems and so on. He worked hard at literature. This led to his great
success. He wrote more than 160 stories in all .He was famous for his funny fairy tales, which became popular all over the world. He died in 1875.
【评语】
本文用词准确，语言流畅，内容符合要求
My favorite program
【要求】
现在随着电视等传播媒介的普及和发展，电视节目的花样越来越多，知识性、娱乐性的侧重也各有不同。请你写一篇文章，介绍一下你最喜欢的节目。
【范文】
My favorite program
Nowadays radios and TVs play a more and more important role in our daily life. There are many programs shown every day. Some of them are very good. My favorite program is called“The Animal World”, which is broadcast by CCTV every Sunday night.
The program provides us with natural scenes, the life of all kinds of wild animals and the wonderful explanation about it. We also acquire some knowledge about animals, even some plants. So in my opinion, it is an
interesting as well as an instructive program. Be sides, the pictures are very beautiful.
It's really a great joy to watch it. If you don't believe it, Just watch it yourself.
【评语】
这篇文章给我们提供了一种写说明文的一般结构：点明主题——一般介绍——文章主体——概括和归纳结尾。通过这种结构，可使描述脉络清晰，表述自然流畅，不致于发生思路混乱的局面。
你喜欢哪个电视台的什么节目？你也试写一下？
英语说明文及范文点评
【要求】
要求：假设你是一名图书馆的工作人员，请写一篇文章说明文，介绍图书的借阅规则。字数在80100字之间。
【范文】
Something You Must Know
This library is and English Language teaching and learning librany. If you want to borrow some books, you must fill out a library application form and put it in the box on the librarian's desk. Because of the large number of applications we receive each week, you must wait one week. Please bring yor student or work card to pick up your library card. Library application forms which are not picked up within 2 months will be discarded and you will have to reapply.
【评语】
本文的借书规则表述得比较清晰，注意到了说明文语言的精练准确、通俗易懂的特点。对于高中生而言，这是一篇优秀的应试作文。
There is no indefinite liberty.
【要求】
要求：小程原来英语成绩很差，自从他参加了学校的英语角，成绩有了很大的进步，尤其是听力和口语提高更是迅速。请你代小程写一篇短文，介绍一下英语角的情况。
【范文】
English Corner
English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English. Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking. The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking.
English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends. When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common; that is they wanted to communicate in English. So the atmosphere was relaxing.
English Corner enlarges our would. As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we can't learn from books.
【评语】
本文第一段是总领段，点明了English Corner 在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了English Corner如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，无华丽词汇之堆砌，但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。
Without you ,it would have never been possible. Thank you.
【要求】
请用英语写一篇关于你校的校园平面图（diagram
教师办公室在教学楼三楼。
学校四周是树。
字数：100
【范文】
This is a diagram of our schoolyard. It is four hundred meters long and three hundred meters wide. The school gate faces the south. Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school yard. It is a building of five stories .The teachers' offices are on the third floor.
There is a garden in front of the teaching building. On the left of the garden is our library. Our lab is on the right of the garden. There is a large playground behind the teaching building. Many trees are planted
around the school-yard.
【评语】
本文按照由外到内、由前往后的顺序进行介绍说明，使文章层次分明，脉胳清晰，说明简短有力。
Brevity is the soul of wit. 文以简洁为贵
English Dictionaries
【要求】
English Dictionariesspelling）；发音（pronunciation）和意项（meanings）。请你写一短文向别人介绍一本普通的英文字典。
【范文】
English Dictionaries
Most English dictionaries will tell you a number of things about the
language.
There are three important things, spelling, pronunciation and meanings. The first is the spelling of the words. If you are not sure about the
spelling of a word, you can try to find the correct spelling in a
dictionary. The words are always given in alphabetical order.
The second thing is pronunciation, Most dictionaries give the pronunciation of a word in a special kind of alphabet, which is called phonetic.
The third thing a dictionary will tell you is the meanings of words,Many
words have more than one meaning, and a good dictionary will explain all of the word's meanings.
These are some of the important facts that you can learn from dictionaries.
【评语】
本文抓住了英文字典的三个方面的主要内容进行阐述，采用总—分—总的结构方式组织材料，显得结构严谨。文章紧扣字典的主要特点进行说明，显得重点突出，对字典有一清晰的认识。
“barbecue”是日常生活中常见的一种食品，想知道是什么就去查字典吧。
Hans Christian Anderson
【要求】
请根据下列内容和所给单词及词组，用英语写一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生
（Hans Christian Anderson100——120。内容提示：安徒生生于1805年。十一岁丧
父。由于家境贫困，童年时代没能上学，开始跟人学习缝纫。十四岁时到一剧院工作。后来在一些热心的艺术家的帮助下，上了学。1828年接受高等教育，毕业后献身文学（literature）。他写剧本、小说、诗歌等等。他努力创作，获得很大成功。一生共创作160多个故事。1875年去世。
Words and Expressions to Be Used:
world-famous devote oneself to fairy tales
by the time advanced education lead to
【范文】
Hans Christian Anderson
Hans Christian Anderson was a world-famous writer of fairy tales. He was born in 1805. When he was eleven his father died. His family was then so poor that he could not go to school during his childhood. He learned sewing from a tailor.
At the age of fourteen, he went to work in a theatre. Later helped by some warm-hearted artists, he went to school. In 1828, he began to get advanced education.
After graduation, he devoted himself to literature. He wrote plays, novels, poems and so on. He worked hard at literature. This led to his great
success. He wrote more than 160 stories in all .He was famous for his funny fairy tales, which became popular all over the world. He died in 1875.
【评语】
本文用词准确，语言流畅，内容符合要求
My favorite program
【要求】
现在随着电视等传播媒介的普及和发展，电视节目的花样越来越多，知识性、娱乐性的侧重也各有不同。请你写一篇文章，介绍一下你最喜欢的节目。
【范文】
My favorite program
Nowadays radios and TVs play a more and more important role in our daily life. There are many programs shown every day. Some of them are very good. My favorite program is called“The Animal World”, which is broadcast by CCTV every Sunday night.
The program provides us with natural scenes, the life of all kinds of wild animals and the wonderful explanation about it. We also acquire some knowledge about animals, even some plants. So in my opinion, it is an
interesting as well as an instructive program. Be sides, the pictures are very beautiful.
It's really a great joy to watch it. If you don't believe it, Just watch it yourself.
【评语】
这篇文章给我们提供了一种写说明文的一般结构：点明主题——一般介绍——文章主体——概括和归纳结尾。通过这种结构，可使描述脉络清晰，表述自然流畅，不致于发生思路混乱的局面。
你喜欢哪个电视台的什么节目？你也试写一下？