2014年6月英语四六级作文汇总分析及点评

2014年6月英语四级作文汇总分析及点评四级写作题目一：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目二：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

四级写作题目三：

Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China. What is the place would you show him or her and why?

与去年的图画作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了话题作文的形式，并且所给话题也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展开思路。更令人惊奇的是今年的作文虽然有三个话题，但是话题设定的背景信息是趋同的，都是说外国朋友要来中国或来你的家乡或来你的学校，让你介绍一下中国/家乡/学校的特色，目的还是为了推介我们本土的文化特色，看来出题人是越来越看重中国传统文化的弘扬了。去年的翻译题当中就出现了一系列的对中国传统文化的介绍，像中餐，中国结，茶文化，中国园林，中秋等等。所以说，文化题材，特别是有关中国文化特色的题材要成为以后大家复习的重点内容。以后备考四六级的同学一定要多联系这个文化题材的翻译和写作。

【参考范文1】

The Cherry Avenue

If I'm the guide of my foreign friend's visit to our campus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our first destination.

As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is lined with hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossom trees. It is about 200 meters long and a major scenic spot in our campus. In spring when the cherry trees bloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from a distance, it seems as if the road were surrounded by pink-hued clouds. Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fall gently like a drizzle. Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.

What's more special is the buildings along the avenue. Built in early 1900s, they are now called

In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both an amazing sight-seeing and a great opportunity to know about the culture of our school.

【点评】

本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式，改为情境式话题作文，可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活，要求介绍大学校园的某个地方，即一篇介绍性的短文，难度不大，只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫，避免同样的词多次出现。

【参考范文2】

Guilin – A Beautiful City in China

In China, there's a saying that

Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.

Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.

I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.

【参考范文3】 Yu Garden If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden. Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines. I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined. 2014年6月英语六级作文参考范文：hometown

【写作真题】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?

【参考范文】

The First Place I Will Show in My Hometown—the Central Avenue

My hometown is Harbin. The most interesting place which I would like to take my foreign friends to is the Central Avenue, if they come to my hometown. The reasons for this can be illustrated as below. To begin with, as the symbol of Harbin, the Central Avenue not only has a long history, but also a famous food palace. There are a variety of delicious foods for you to choose. Just take the ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer as an example. Many of tourists to the Central Avenue sing their praises for the ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. In addition, the brilliant historic culture of the Central Avenue can widen people’s vision and enhance their knowledge, which lays a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city—Harbin. I believe my foreign friends will enjoy themselves in the Central Avenue. Not only can they appreciate the wonderful landscape of Harbin but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than the Central Avenue! 2014年6月英语六级作文真题及参考范文：能力与外表

【六级作文真题】

Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to judge a person by appearance. You can give explain to

illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words .

【六级作文范文】

In recent years, there has been a widely-held feeling towards evaluating a person on the basis of his/her appearance. On the surface, it may seem a sound idea, but on closer analysis we find it unscientific and unconvincing. There are numerous reasons for this argument, but I shall here explore only one of the most important ones.

We can never judge a person by his/her external appearance because no one is able to gain a full appreciation of a person merely by it. One’s good impression on others does not usually develop from the way one looks, but the inner qualities one possesses. For example, the virtues of the Chinese people are regarded as beautiful, because they have helped to produce such a magnificent culture in the world. From what have been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that we should adopt appropriate standards to estimate persons, like their inner qualities or practical actions. 2014年6月英语六级作文范文及点评：别把鸡蛋放在一个篮子里 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket. You can give

explanations to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

When making crucial decisions or important plans, it is always necessary to have a plan B. As the old saying goes,

It is easy to understand that, for any plan that involves investments beforehand, one should prepare for the worst situation no matter how well it appears currently. When the profits are higher, people are also taking greater risks. For example, as the real-estate market is highly profitable nowadays, many people invest all their money into new houses and some even raise a mortgage. The possible result is that once the market cools down and the house prices go on a decrease, the investors are more likely to lose the profits as well as the capital. Admittedly, putting all the eggs in one basket maximizes the possible gaining. However, in unfavorable conditions, it also maximizes the loss.

In conclusion, it is unwise to put all your hopes into one possible solution. People should all learn the importance of avoiding risks with a plan B. 【点评】题解：“把所有鸡蛋放在一个篮子里是不明智的。” 本题难度中上，讨论风险与机会的关系，以及减少风险的方法，较抽象。文章可采取三段式。首段简单阐述话题含义。主体部分重点论述“把所有鸡蛋放在一个篮子里”可能带来的风险。由于话题较抽象，此处可用具体的事例论述，证明在有一定风险的情况下，人们不应该将所有的希望都集中在同一个解决方案中，而是应该有备用方案，以减少风险。结论部分重述主题。 2014年6月英语六级作文范文及点评：Jump to conclusions For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. You can give explanations to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

A famous saying goes: “Seeing is believing.” indicating that what you hear may not be reliable, while what you see can be trustworthy. This opinion, however, is still quite partial.

What we see or hear are the facts, but they might be only part of the story, therefore a quick conclusion can be reckless and lead to unnecessary

misunderstandings. For example, on a metro packed with passengers, some young people are sitting while an elderly is standing. If you don’t find out the whole story, you may jump to a conclusion that these young people are so rude and indifferent that they show no love and care to the elderly. But the true story may be that these young people have invited the old man to sit down before you came, even if they are quite exhausted after a whole day’s work, while the elderly 6

is quite refreshed after a workout and he refused to take the seat so that the young passengers can have a rest. In conclusion, before making a judgement, it is better to get to know the situation in a comprehensive way. Only in that case, can we reduce the risks of misunderstanding to the minimum. 【点评】题解：“根据所见、所闻立刻得出结论是不明智的。” 本题难度中上，话题有一定的思辨性，较抽象。文章可采取三段式。首段简单阐述自己的论点。主体部分可以进一步阐释，并结合例子进行论证。结论部分再次强调自己的论点，提出根据所见、所闻立刻得出结论可能是片面的。 2014年6月英语六级作文真题及范文：define anything 以下为新东方在线四六级名师周思成为大家带来的六级作文范文：

Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that teenagers are become especially self-conscious. Under this circumstance, the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions, which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable.

The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects. To begin with, it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second. So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular period of the development of things, which proves unstable and changeable. In addition, the perspectives we conclude just through seeing or listening are usually 7

one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive.

To sum up, it is unwise for us to define anything as what we assume or imagine at first sight. Only by our serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusions.