The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government
has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
上海将举办2010年世界博览会。世博会有着悠久的历史,但它一直在亚洲举办。所以在2010年世界博览会是一种荣誉,所有的亚洲人。(你政府)。承诺将是最好的一个。上海,作为主办城市,将有更多的机会来发展迅速。作为一个学生,在上海,我要学好英语,这样我就可以成为一名志愿者在世博会有助于外国人了解更多的关于上海。
How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)
Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.
上海发生了巨大的变化,越来越多的人在整个世界的注意力集中在上海了。作为一个公民,我觉得我得把上海不遗余力地做一点。首先,我决定要帮助种更多的树来让我们的城市变得更美丽。其次,我要服从、善于向他人学习。第三,我应该努力学习,这样我就能够更好的为我的城市。
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing,
[2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
近年来,得到一个证书已经成为一种新的开裂大学生。[1]只是随意要求学生在校园里他或她正忙着做,[2]很有可能,你可以得到答案[3],他或她正在准备一个证书的某种
[2][4]为什么这个开裂出现?[4],主要有两个原因造成了这种现象。首先,[5]这是就业压力,使高校学生得到更多的证书。与入学扩张,越来越多的高校毕业生不得不面对竞争激烈的就业市场。如何才能使自己更有竞争力吗?更多的证书,也许吧。第二,文凭和证书还重要的标准[6],许多雇主衡量一个人的能力。为了增加资格的学生工作,迫使他们从一个测验到另一个地方。[7]从我的角度来看,我们应该更理性的[8]当谈到证书,[9]从证书[2]并不证明自身的能力。在获得认证的被疯狂盲目是[10]只是浪费时间。总之,我们应注重提高我们的能力,但没有得到[10]证书没有实用价值
1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌
2)产生这种现象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待这一现象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they
[1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.
[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their
consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
现在许多大学生喜欢追求名牌。从服装到手机,甚至像电子词典的研究文章和笔,他们[1]人更倾向于购买名牌。[2]再者,许多来自贫困家庭的学生开始[3]遵循这种消费趋势。这种现象引起了人们的广泛注意。[4]以下理由可以解释大学生所偏爱的著名品牌。[2]的基础之上,在许多大学生的眼睛,一个著名品牌是一个复杂的象征,味道。他们指望别人来欣赏他们的高品位、高品味。[2],更重要的是,在现代社会中,知名品牌在某种程度上都是平等的,时尚,[5]的具有极大的吸引力,年轻的大学生。[2]之外,父母溺爱孩子帮助形成自己的不良消费习惯。[2]就我而言,[6]这是非理性的大学生追求名牌。[3],毕竟,最著名的品牌有[7]远远超出他们的消费能力。[3],[8]这不是著名品牌,但一个人的高贵的人物,真正让他高班。
[3]因此,大学生应重视培养良好的性格[9]而不是追求名牌。
1)简单介绍个人情况
2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
高分范文
Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
一封申请银行贷款
9月12日
有关,
我是大一的联合大学主修[1]的基础上,应用物理学。我希望我可以获得银行贷款来支持我的研究在应用物理学为下列四十年。
我的父母都是下岗工人,所以它是超出他们的力量[2]的基础上,通过大学教育财政我。
[3]使事情变得更糟的是,我的母亲突然病倒了,是一个重要的手术。[4],[5]的大学学费变得更重的负担,我的家庭,我不得不申请一个人民币银行贷款。
[6]我给你我的诺言,贷款将用于正常。[4],[7]我将不遗余力的努力都在学习和未来的职业来偿还贷款。我将不胜感激。如果我的申请。我期待着很快收到你的来信。
真诚的你,
歌雪
1）先背3个句子
1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)
2 The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life. On the one hand …, But on the other hand.（讲影响）
3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）
Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。
2）模板（2个模板）
1 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。
中间段：措施
结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结
开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……
结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.
2 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论
中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)
结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）
开头段：It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.
中间段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..
On the other hand, a great many people insist that….
结尾段：From my perspective, however…. (你的观点) . Therefore, it’s time that (措施之类的)
6级作文万能句子（补充在”…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合） 重点背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。
1）Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life. 。。。能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，。。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3）。。。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. 。。。占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）
4）work. 住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7）develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8）By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
9）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and
knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
10）1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响
2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响
The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government
has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
上海将举办2010年世界博览会。世博会有着悠久的历史,但它一直在亚洲举办。所以在2010年世界博览会是一种荣誉,所有的亚洲人。(你政府)。承诺将是最好的一个。上海,作为主办城市,将有更多的机会来发展迅速。作为一个学生,在上海,我要学好英语,这样我就可以成为一名志愿者在世博会有助于外国人了解更多的关于上海。
How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)
Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.
上海发生了巨大的变化,越来越多的人在整个世界的注意力集中在上海了。作为一个公民,我觉得我得把上海不遗余力地做一点。首先,我决定要帮助种更多的树来让我们的城市变得更美丽。其次,我要服从、善于向他人学习。第三,我应该努力学习,这样我就能够更好的为我的城市。
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing,
[2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
近年来,得到一个证书已经成为一种新的开裂大学生。[1]只是随意要求学生在校园里他或她正忙着做,[2]很有可能,你可以得到答案[3],他或她正在准备一个证书的某种
[2][4]为什么这个开裂出现?[4],主要有两个原因造成了这种现象。首先,[5]这是就业压力,使高校学生得到更多的证书。与入学扩张,越来越多的高校毕业生不得不面对竞争激烈的就业市场。如何才能使自己更有竞争力吗?更多的证书,也许吧。第二,文凭和证书还重要的标准[6],许多雇主衡量一个人的能力。为了增加资格的学生工作,迫使他们从一个测验到另一个地方。[7]从我的角度来看,我们应该更理性的[8]当谈到证书,[9]从证书[2]并不证明自身的能力。在获得认证的被疯狂盲目是[10]只是浪费时间。总之,我们应注重提高我们的能力,但没有得到[10]证书没有实用价值
1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌
2)产生这种现象的原因是什么
3)你如何看待这一现象
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they
[1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.
[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their
consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.
现在许多大学生喜欢追求名牌。从服装到手机,甚至像电子词典的研究文章和笔,他们[1]人更倾向于购买名牌。[2]再者,许多来自贫困家庭的学生开始[3]遵循这种消费趋势。这种现象引起了人们的广泛注意。[4]以下理由可以解释大学生所偏爱的著名品牌。[2]的基础之上,在许多大学生的眼睛,一个著名品牌是一个复杂的象征,味道。他们指望别人来欣赏他们的高品位、高品味。[2],更重要的是,在现代社会中,知名品牌在某种程度上都是平等的,时尚,[5]的具有极大的吸引力,年轻的大学生。[2]之外,父母溺爱孩子帮助形成自己的不良消费习惯。[2]就我而言,[6]这是非理性的大学生追求名牌。[3],毕竟,最著名的品牌有[7]远远超出他们的消费能力。[3],[8]这不是著名品牌,但一个人的高贵的人物,真正让他高班。
[3]因此,大学生应重视培养良好的性格[9]而不是追求名牌。
1)简单介绍个人情况
2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
高分范文
Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
一封申请银行贷款
9月12日
有关,
我是大一的联合大学主修[1]的基础上,应用物理学。我希望我可以获得银行贷款来支持我的研究在应用物理学为下列四十年。
我的父母都是下岗工人,所以它是超出他们的力量[2]的基础上,通过大学教育财政我。
[3]使事情变得更糟的是,我的母亲突然病倒了,是一个重要的手术。[4],[5]的大学学费变得更重的负担,我的家庭,我不得不申请一个人民币银行贷款。
[6]我给你我的诺言,贷款将用于正常。[4],[7]我将不遗余力的努力都在学习和未来的职业来偿还贷款。我将不胜感激。如果我的申请。我期待着很快收到你的来信。
真诚的你,
歌雪
1）先背3个句子
1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)
2 The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life. On the one hand …, But on the other hand.（讲影响）
3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）
Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。
2）模板（2个模板）
1 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。
中间段：措施
结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结
开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……
结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.
2 开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论
中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)
结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）
开头段：It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.
中间段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..
On the other hand, a great many people insist that….
结尾段：From my perspective, however…. (你的观点) . Therefore, it’s time that (措施之类的)
6级作文万能句子（补充在”…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合） 重点背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。
1）Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life. 。。。能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，。。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3）。。。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. 。。。占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）
4）work. 住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7）develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8）By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
9）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and
knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
10）1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响
2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响