中考英语书面表达教学案
一．真题再现：
1．2013年衡阳市初中毕业学业水平考试英语试卷之书面表达(计l0分)
每个人的一生中都有许多值得感谢的人，你最想感谢的人是谁呢? 是父母、老师、朋友，还是„„? 以Tom为名给他／她／他们写一封信，说说你的心里话。 要求：
1．80个词左右。 2．表达正确，行文流畅。
3. 至少写出一个具体事例。 4．信件开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 5．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息。 Dear ,
Best wishes !
Yours, Tom
参考范文： Dear father,
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. Today I want to say, "I love you, dad !" In my heart, you are not only my father, but also my good friend.
Since I was born, you have given me all your love and care. In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education, you have to work hard every day. I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired.
Except that, you are very strict with me. You often tell me to study hard, get along well with others, not to give up when facing difficulties. Once I got a C in the math exam, I felt sorry for it, I thought you would be angry, instead, you weren't angry with me, you helped me to find out why I failed, and encouraged me to be brave. Since then, I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble. Thank you very much for everything you’ve done for me.
评分原则：本题总分为l0分，按四个档次给分。各档次给分范围和要求： 第四档：(9—10分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务，写出了全部内容要点，语句通顺，具有较强的语言运用能力。全篇错误不超过2处，可得满分。 第三档：(6—8分)
完成试题规定的任务，应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，语言表达基本正确， 但有错误。语法、拼写错误不超过8处，每错两处扣0．5分。 第二档：(4—5分)
写出大部分内容要点，但语言表述不够正确，语法、词汇错误超过8处，但不影响对写 作内容的理解。 第一档：(1—3分)
未完成试题规定的任务，明显遗漏主要内容，未能传达信息，语法、词汇错误很多。
2．（2012衡阳书面表达）健康是人生的一笔财富，请以“A Healthy Lifestyle”为题从健康饮食，、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇80词左右的短文，要求表述全面、正确、流畅。
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3．（2011衡阳书面表达）：你喜欢过生日吗？你生日过得开心吗？每个人都曾有过难以忘怀的生日。请以---,My Birthday为题写一篇短文，介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日，让大家共同分享你生日的快乐。要求：1词数：80左右。2语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
4.文中不能出现自已的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 以上可见中考英语书面表达有以下特点： 1.半开放式。即以一定的主题，自由发挥。 2.主题紧扣教材，同同学们的生活紧密相连。 二．中考英语书面表达解题技巧及复习策略 解题技巧：
1.仔细审题，要把题目规定的要点全部表达清楚，不能遗漏，也不能文不对题。 2.语言表达正确、恰当，文意清楚连贯，过渡自然。 3.字迹工整，词数基本符合要求。 复习策略：
1.能熟练使用简单句五种基本句型，状语从句，宾语从句，并列句，there be句型，非谓语动词等来表达自已的意思。 2.熟悉教材所涉及到的话题
附1：初中阶段所涉及到的话题：
七年级上册：介绍你身面的一个人：包括外貌和性格
七年级下册：1.My school life 2.介绍中国的节日：The spring festival. 八年级上册：1.My favorite sport.
2.介绍一次校运会。（召开的时间，你们班参加的人及项目，你参加„„，你 学到„„体会）
3．How to keep fit/healthy.
八年级下册：1.Give advice to people in a bad mood. 2.什么能影响你的心情，你是如何克服？
3．A travel experience. 4.看图作文
九年级上册：1.Great changes in my hometown. 2.Notice
3.How to be a greener person. 4.How to learn English well
九年级下册：1.The influence of Television/Internet on children. 2.你即将初中毕业，你有何感想，你想对你的朋友，老师说什么？
部分参考范文：
1.介绍中国的节日： The spring festival.
In China, the Spring Festival is a big event. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. They also buy some new clothes. On the eve of the festival, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up and enjoy dumplings at midnight for a good luck. On the first day of the lunar new year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them.
2. How to give advice to people in a bad mood.
Many people may have unhappy feelings after some bad experiences. such as a failure in exam or losing a family member. Even the weather can affect our feelings. It’s normal to feel sad when something bad happens to us. It’s all right to show we are sad. It’s all right to cry. But if we talk to others, listen to soft music or take part in
activities, we may feel much better, and be happy again.
3.Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
4.Notice
(A) 加拿大著名专家(expert) Jim Greenlaw将于本周日来我校作演讲，演讲主题是 Saving Our Earth，假如你是校学生会主席，请写则通知，告诉全校同学。
时间: 上午9: 00 地点: 学校礼堂
要求: 带好笔记本并做好笔记；保持会场安静，不要乱扔垃圾。 Boys and girls，
An expert called Jim Greenlaw from Canada will come to our school this Sunday. He will give a report on “Saving Our Earth”. The report will start/begin in our school hall at 9: 00 in the morning. Remember to bring your notebooks. Please keep quiet and don’t throw rubbish about.
That’s all. Thank you.
5． “保护环境，人人有责”，请以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。（80词左右）
How to Be a Greener Person
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.
6．How to learn English well
你的英语非常优秀, 学校请你和七年级的同学做一次英语学习经验交流。请根据下列提示，写一份80词左右的发言稿。 Boys and girls，
It’s my honor to come here to share my opinions of learning English with you. I began to learn English when I was ten. At that time I knew nothing about English. But now I enjoy English very much. I like it not only because it’s useful, but also because I have a lot of fun in learning it. I often take part in the English corner, and follow the English tapes to practice spoken English. Morning is the best time to remember words. Keeping a diary in English every day is a good way to improve my writing.
That’s all. Thank you.
7.毕业典礼演讲稿：你即将初中毕业，你有何感想，你想对你的朋友，老师说什么？
Hello, every one! I have many unforgettable memories of the things that happened over the past three years. We have studied and lived together like a big family. We have had a lot of fun together, too. I have learned a lot from you
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all, my dear teachers and students. I have also learned that if I want to succeed, I must study hard. We’ll say goodbye to each other soon. I’ll never forget you. I hope our friendship will last forever. At last, I thank you all and wish you success in the future.
8．The influence of Internet on children.
现在学生在网吧上网（get on-line）成风，你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题。请你根据表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇60词左右的讲话稿，要点必须齐全。
Many students like getting on-line very much. They can learn how to use the modern machine — computers. They can learn much more knowledge from the Internet. It can make them clever by playing different kinds of games.
But some students spend too much time playing games. Some even make friends on-line. It takes them too much time to write too many letters to each other, so they do worse in their lessons.
I think they mustn’t get on-line when they’re studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.
9.How to Keep Healthy
If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.
We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke, etc. It’s also very important. 10．“安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以
“Keeping safe________ (at home/ at school /on the road…)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：
(1) Is it important to keep safe...? (2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe...?
Keeping safe at school
It’s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.
First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us. If we follow the advice, we’ll make ourselves safe at school.
中考英语书面表达教学案
一．真题再现：
1．2013年衡阳市初中毕业学业水平考试英语试卷之书面表达(计l0分)
每个人的一生中都有许多值得感谢的人，你最想感谢的人是谁呢? 是父母、老师、朋友，还是„„? 以Tom为名给他／她／他们写一封信，说说你的心里话。 要求：
1．80个词左右。 2．表达正确，行文流畅。
3. 至少写出一个具体事例。 4．信件开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 5．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、地址、学校等相关信息。 Dear ,
Best wishes !
Yours, Tom
参考范文： Dear father,
I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. Today I want to say, "I love you, dad !" In my heart, you are not only my father, but also my good friend.
Since I was born, you have given me all your love and care. In order to create a better living condition and let me receive better education, you have to work hard every day. I always remember your coming home late and feeling tired.
Except that, you are very strict with me. You often tell me to study hard, get along well with others, not to give up when facing difficulties. Once I got a C in the math exam, I felt sorry for it, I thought you would be angry, instead, you weren't angry with me, you helped me to find out why I failed, and encouraged me to be brave. Since then, I always smile at life whenever I have any trouble. Thank you very much for everything you’ve done for me.
评分原则：本题总分为l0分，按四个档次给分。各档次给分范围和要求： 第四档：(9—10分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务，写出了全部内容要点，语句通顺，具有较强的语言运用能力。全篇错误不超过2处，可得满分。 第三档：(6—8分)
完成试题规定的任务，应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，语言表达基本正确， 但有错误。语法、拼写错误不超过8处，每错两处扣0．5分。 第二档：(4—5分)
写出大部分内容要点，但语言表述不够正确，语法、词汇错误超过8处，但不影响对写 作内容的理解。 第一档：(1—3分)
未完成试题规定的任务，明显遗漏主要内容，未能传达信息，语法、词汇错误很多。
2．（2012衡阳书面表达）健康是人生的一笔财富，请以“A Healthy Lifestyle”为题从健康饮食，、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇80词左右的短文，要求表述全面、正确、流畅。
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3．（2011衡阳书面表达）：你喜欢过生日吗？你生日过得开心吗？每个人都曾有过难以忘怀的生日。请以---,My Birthday为题写一篇短文，介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日，让大家共同分享你生日的快乐。要求：1词数：80左右。2语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
4.文中不能出现自已的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 以上可见中考英语书面表达有以下特点： 1.半开放式。即以一定的主题，自由发挥。 2.主题紧扣教材，同同学们的生活紧密相连。 二．中考英语书面表达解题技巧及复习策略 解题技巧：
1.仔细审题，要把题目规定的要点全部表达清楚，不能遗漏，也不能文不对题。 2.语言表达正确、恰当，文意清楚连贯，过渡自然。 3.字迹工整，词数基本符合要求。 复习策略：
1.能熟练使用简单句五种基本句型，状语从句，宾语从句，并列句，there be句型，非谓语动词等来表达自已的意思。 2.熟悉教材所涉及到的话题
附1：初中阶段所涉及到的话题：
七年级上册：介绍你身面的一个人：包括外貌和性格
七年级下册：1.My school life 2.介绍中国的节日：The spring festival. 八年级上册：1.My favorite sport.
2.介绍一次校运会。（召开的时间，你们班参加的人及项目，你参加„„，你 学到„„体会）
3．How to keep fit/healthy.
八年级下册：1.Give advice to people in a bad mood. 2.什么能影响你的心情，你是如何克服？
3．A travel experience. 4.看图作文
九年级上册：1.Great changes in my hometown. 2.Notice
3.How to be a greener person. 4.How to learn English well
九年级下册：1.The influence of Television/Internet on children. 2.你即将初中毕业，你有何感想，你想对你的朋友，老师说什么？
部分参考范文：
1.介绍中国的节日： The spring festival.
In China, the Spring Festival is a big event. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. They also buy some new clothes. On the eve of the festival, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up and enjoy dumplings at midnight for a good luck. On the first day of the lunar new year, children put on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them.
2. How to give advice to people in a bad mood.
Many people may have unhappy feelings after some bad experiences. such as a failure in exam or losing a family member. Even the weather can affect our feelings. It’s normal to feel sad when something bad happens to us. It’s all right to show we are sad. It’s all right to cry. But if we talk to others, listen to soft music or take part in
activities, we may feel much better, and be happy again.
3.Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
4.Notice
(A) 加拿大著名专家(expert) Jim Greenlaw将于本周日来我校作演讲，演讲主题是 Saving Our Earth，假如你是校学生会主席，请写则通知，告诉全校同学。
时间: 上午9: 00 地点: 学校礼堂
要求: 带好笔记本并做好笔记；保持会场安静，不要乱扔垃圾。 Boys and girls，
An expert called Jim Greenlaw from Canada will come to our school this Sunday. He will give a report on “Saving Our Earth”. The report will start/begin in our school hall at 9: 00 in the morning. Remember to bring your notebooks. Please keep quiet and don’t throw rubbish about.
That’s all. Thank you.
5． “保护环境，人人有责”，请以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。（80词左右）
How to Be a Greener Person
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.
6．How to learn English well
你的英语非常优秀, 学校请你和七年级的同学做一次英语学习经验交流。请根据下列提示，写一份80词左右的发言稿。 Boys and girls，
It’s my honor to come here to share my opinions of learning English with you. I began to learn English when I was ten. At that time I knew nothing about English. But now I enjoy English very much. I like it not only because it’s useful, but also because I have a lot of fun in learning it. I often take part in the English corner, and follow the English tapes to practice spoken English. Morning is the best time to remember words. Keeping a diary in English every day is a good way to improve my writing.
That’s all. Thank you.
7.毕业典礼演讲稿：你即将初中毕业，你有何感想，你想对你的朋友，老师说什么？
Hello, every one! I have many unforgettable memories of the things that happened over the past three years. We have studied and lived together like a big family. We have had a lot of fun together, too. I have learned a lot from you
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all, my dear teachers and students. I have also learned that if I want to succeed, I must study hard. We’ll say goodbye to each other soon. I’ll never forget you. I hope our friendship will last forever. At last, I thank you all and wish you success in the future.
8．The influence of Internet on children.
现在学生在网吧上网（get on-line）成风，你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题。请你根据表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇60词左右的讲话稿，要点必须齐全。
Many students like getting on-line very much. They can learn how to use the modern machine — computers. They can learn much more knowledge from the Internet. It can make them clever by playing different kinds of games.
But some students spend too much time playing games. Some even make friends on-line. It takes them too much time to write too many letters to each other, so they do worse in their lessons.
I think they mustn’t get on-line when they’re studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.
9.How to Keep Healthy
If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.
We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke, etc. It’s also very important. 10．“安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以
“Keeping safe________ (at home/ at school /on the road…)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：
(1) Is it important to keep safe...? (2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe...?
Keeping safe at school
It’s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.
First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us. If we follow the advice, we’ll make ourselves safe at school.