一、总模版
Paragraph 1 (描绘数据)
The above (picture/charts/graph/table...) furnishes(根据情况选择单复数) us with some information concerning the changes of ... As can be seen, ...
Paragraph 2 (分析原因)
It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors which(根据情况选择其一) *underlie the above (changes/trend/phenomenon)
*may explain why ... (比如犯罪率增加)
In the first place, ... Therefore, ... In the second place,... Thus,... (Consequently,...此句可选可不选)What’s more,... (比如:soaring fuel prices ) also contribute greatly to the above (changes/trend/phenomenon).
Paragraph 3 (提出建议)
Taking into account all argument offered above, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that ...(此处所接内容,应依情况选择。下面分情况讨论)
*若得出消极型结论并打算提出强烈建议(比如犯罪、环境污染)
It is imperative for us to take steps to (reverse the disturbing trend / tackle the disturbing problem / eliminate the phenomenon) illustrated in the chart.
*若得出消极型结论并打算提出温和建议(上句that 后面的内容要自己加)
I think that the situation is worth profound consideration by ... and ... . On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...
*若得出积极结论
This establish trend is positive and therefore acceptable. And I am strongly convinced that this trend will continue for quite a while in the near future.
*若得出中立结论,就不评论了,直接预测未来趋势
It can be reasonably predicted that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the near future.
******以上内容无论主干还是分支都不一定要全部用上,大家按情况灵活变通。
二、说明段。
第一段的数据描述,大致分四种:折线图、饼图、表格、柱状图。每种图描绘数据的常用方式都不难学,只要看看我说的那本曹其军老师的范文,分类总结即可。
第二段的原因分析,第三段的建议,没有什么能万用的内容,只能靠平时积累。建议大家针对每种不同的图,不同的类型挑出书中的一到两篇按上述模版进行练习,这样考试时方能运用自如。在练习中,要注意积累一些通用度比较高的原因及建议。英语二的作文字数要
求不高,只要适当训练,考试时会有话可说的,大家不用担心。练习多了,大家就知道怎么瞎掰了,呵呵。
大家在刚开始的时候,面对一个题目可能会觉得无从下笔。这时,不妨把这个模版和其它资料都打印出来,看着模版写作文。经过几次实践,应该会发现某些句子比较好用比较好记,比较适合你。这时,便可根据你的经验对模版删减或修订,形成自己的模版,然后背下来。最后,要注意,表达同一个意思,记住一个你最喜欢的表达方式就好,不要贪多,这样才能简化模版,方便记忆。要知道,越固定,越不容易失误。
另外,说两点建议。首先,在作文中,尽量不用缩写。比如”it’s” 应改为”it is “,这是书面语的要求。其次,大家不要太纠结语法的标准性。因为,评分时老师看的是你能不能说清楚你的意思,能不能对目标读者产生预期效果。只要你说得清楚,就不算是重大语法错误,对分数影响是不会太大的。比如“该用in还是该用on”,能用准确固然好,但是即便用错,也不影响理解,因此不会扣很多分。这种小错误,跟单词拼写错误一样,可能几个加一起才会扣一分。
三、高频句子
* In recent yeas, the issue of ... Has attracted extensive attention from the public, as is obviously depicted in the (picture/charts/graph/ table...)
可用于第一或第二段段首
*Recently, people in growing number are coming to realize that there is a statistically significant correlation between ... and ...(比如犯罪率与教育水平)
可用于第二段
*Statistics released by CASS---- Chinese Academy of Social Sciences last year suggest that ... *It is reported that ...
*Studies show that one of the primary causes of ... is ...
可用于第二段分析原因
*First of all, it is the responsibility of the government, the mass media and schools of all levels to take advantage of their publicity to awaken the public to the (significance / severity) of ... *What’s more, relevant laws and regulations should be formulated to ...
*Moreover, each individual should develop (a healthy way of life / a positive outlook of life) and serve as a (driving force / counterbalance) , taking plunge into the campaign to ...
*Only by taking these effective measures can we ...(例如:stop the deteriorating trend.) 常用于消极结论及强烈建议
*There is no doubt that the above issue has become an extremely serious problem(facing the contemporary world / of contemporary Chinese society.)
一、总模版
Paragraph 1 (描绘数据)
The above (picture/charts/graph/table...) furnishes(根据情况选择单复数) us with some information concerning the changes of ... As can be seen, ...
Paragraph 2 (分析原因)
It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors which(根据情况选择其一) *underlie the above (changes/trend/phenomenon)
*may explain why ... (比如犯罪率增加)
In the first place, ... Therefore, ... In the second place,... Thus,... (Consequently,...此句可选可不选)What’s more,... (比如:soaring fuel prices ) also contribute greatly to the above (changes/trend/phenomenon).
Paragraph 3 (提出建议)
Taking into account all argument offered above, we may reasonably arrive at a conclusion that ...(此处所接内容,应依情况选择。下面分情况讨论)
*若得出消极型结论并打算提出强烈建议(比如犯罪、环境污染)
It is imperative for us to take steps to (reverse the disturbing trend / tackle the disturbing problem / eliminate the phenomenon) illustrated in the chart.
*若得出消极型结论并打算提出温和建议(上句that 后面的内容要自己加)
I think that the situation is worth profound consideration by ... and ... . On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...
*若得出积极结论
This establish trend is positive and therefore acceptable. And I am strongly convinced that this trend will continue for quite a while in the near future.
*若得出中立结论,就不评论了,直接预测未来趋势
It can be reasonably predicted that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the near future.
******以上内容无论主干还是分支都不一定要全部用上,大家按情况灵活变通。
二、说明段。
第一段的数据描述,大致分四种:折线图、饼图、表格、柱状图。每种图描绘数据的常用方式都不难学,只要看看我说的那本曹其军老师的范文,分类总结即可。
第二段的原因分析,第三段的建议,没有什么能万用的内容,只能靠平时积累。建议大家针对每种不同的图,不同的类型挑出书中的一到两篇按上述模版进行练习,这样考试时方能运用自如。在练习中,要注意积累一些通用度比较高的原因及建议。英语二的作文字数要
求不高,只要适当训练,考试时会有话可说的,大家不用担心。练习多了,大家就知道怎么瞎掰了,呵呵。
大家在刚开始的时候,面对一个题目可能会觉得无从下笔。这时,不妨把这个模版和其它资料都打印出来,看着模版写作文。经过几次实践,应该会发现某些句子比较好用比较好记,比较适合你。这时,便可根据你的经验对模版删减或修订,形成自己的模版,然后背下来。最后,要注意,表达同一个意思,记住一个你最喜欢的表达方式就好,不要贪多,这样才能简化模版,方便记忆。要知道,越固定,越不容易失误。
另外,说两点建议。首先,在作文中,尽量不用缩写。比如”it’s” 应改为”it is “,这是书面语的要求。其次,大家不要太纠结语法的标准性。因为,评分时老师看的是你能不能说清楚你的意思,能不能对目标读者产生预期效果。只要你说得清楚,就不算是重大语法错误,对分数影响是不会太大的。比如“该用in还是该用on”,能用准确固然好,但是即便用错,也不影响理解,因此不会扣很多分。这种小错误,跟单词拼写错误一样,可能几个加一起才会扣一分。
三、高频句子
* In recent yeas, the issue of ... Has attracted extensive attention from the public, as is obviously depicted in the (picture/charts/graph/ table...)
可用于第一或第二段段首
*Recently, people in growing number are coming to realize that there is a statistically significant correlation between ... and ...(比如犯罪率与教育水平)
可用于第二段
*Statistics released by CASS---- Chinese Academy of Social Sciences last year suggest that ... *It is reported that ...
*Studies show that one of the primary causes of ... is ...
可用于第二段分析原因
*First of all, it is the responsibility of the government, the mass media and schools of all levels to take advantage of their publicity to awaken the public to the (significance / severity) of ... *What’s more, relevant laws and regulations should be formulated to ...
*Moreover, each individual should develop (a healthy way of life / a positive outlook of life) and serve as a (driving force / counterbalance) , taking plunge into the campaign to ...
*Only by taking these effective measures can we ...(例如:stop the deteriorating trend.) 常用于消极结论及强烈建议
*There is no doubt that the above issue has become an extremely serious problem(facing the contemporary world / of contemporary Chinese society.)